I am not good with criticizing literature, so instead I give you spelling corrections. Some of the grammar (like 'he's annoying, he's an idiot, he's just just a torch didn't seem right, but since some poems ignore grammar. I assumed they were intentional.)
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Originally Posted by DemonGod  but, unthil then |
but, until then
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Originally Posted by DemonGod or at least tyr to run from it. |
or at least try to run from it