Violet Wing [Manga/Release Info] - Comments, suggestions

[Maggik]

Chapter List: http://manga.animea.net/violet-wings.html

Few words about VW:
There are few people here ( like kiraralady, uekiphoenix etc. ) that know about the

manga I'm working on, so I decided to make this thread where you can share your

opinions, suggest me some ideas for the manga or leave some GOOD comments

about it. I first started drawing manga right about 1,5 years ago, making a story

based on and inspired from Princess Mononoke anime, while the current "Violet

Wing" idea came first in my mind in July of 2008. The storyline is based generally on

demons, dark side, devil hunters ( reminds you of DMC, I know.. ) and a bit of

romance in <3. Anyway, more information can be found in the Story section below...
I'll be uploading some of the first chapters here on AnimeA manga section, I hope

you'll like it :>

Story:

Title: (EN) Violet Wing
(JAP) 紫翼

Genre(s): Action, Adventure, Comedy, Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, School Life, Shounen, Supernatural

Artist / Author: Serge "Maggik" Olifir ( me >.< )

Status: Ongoing

Released in: 19/05/2009 ( first chapter )

Story:
Story bases on a 16 years old boy Ryuunosuke who returns back to his hometown Yukishiro ( fictional city in Hokkaido region ) after eight years. He meets his old friends and regains the lost memories about his past. But secretly, Ryuu works for a Foundation called "D.E.C." which is responsible for eliminating every sight of evilness and demonic sourses, so the main reason of Ryuu's return is elimination of the 2nd Hell Gatekeeper and in order to detect him, Ryuu and his partner Richard "Tiger" Wilson must defeat and eliminate every demon and sourses of evil aura in Hokkaido's region. Despite of his mission, Ryuunosuke also begins attending school in Yukishiro High and tries to get back the attention of Miyu, his first love.

Characters:

Pic:
Name: Ryuunosuke Niwatsumi ( just a random lastname I came around >.< )
Gender: Male
Age: 16 - 17
Ethnicity: Japanese
Debut: 1st chapter
Occupation: Yukishiro High student, Class "A" Devil Hunter
Background: Ryuu met Kyoko, Kiyoshi and Miyu at age of 4 in kindergarden of
Yukishiro and one year later, he was introduced to Aiko, Kiyoshi's cousin. Their
friendship kept till Ryuu moved out from Hokkaido and gone to Tokyo for some reason (spoiler), as a farewell Miyu gave him a deep kiss before he daparted for the train. Ryuu was living with his father ( Alchemist ), he was divorsed with his mother and Ryuu didn't know anything about her, even that she existed.
The reason why Ryuu became Devil Hunter is concidered as spoiler, so I won't tell it to you yet :3
Personality: Ryuunosuke used to be cheerful and playful as well at age of 8 and before, but he became almost the opposite after he came back to Yukishiro and almost all the time he was a Hunter.
Weaponry: Divocalipse, Hellwing Gamma

Pic:
Name: Richard "Tiger" Wilson
Gender: Male
Age: 27 - 28
Ethnicity: English
Debut: 1st chapter
Occupation: Class "B" Devil Hunter
Background: ( Unknown / Spoilers )
Personality: Together with Ryuu they both appear to be liking and disliking each other, depends on their own mood. Richard's character seems to be sometime
serious and furious, while other times he can just act a fool. Just like in anime classics he is a bit pervert-minded.
Weaponry: Cerberous-B, Tiger claws, Pulsewave Glove

Pic: (ongoing)
Name: Kyoko Haraji
Gender: Female
Age: 16 - 17
Ethnicity: Japanese
Debut: 2nd chapter
Occupation: Yukishiro High student
Background: She's also one of Ryuu's childhood friends. She was born in the same

hospital with Kiyoshi, their parents became good friends and so did they they after the age of 2. In kindergarden they met Ryuu and Miyu and then their friendship kept going.
Personality: I older days she was the trouble of their band, however her attitude after Ryuu's arrival became is a little bit cooler and calm.more Info on Character is to be added later...

~~~Release Info~~~

Chapter 01 - Devil Revolutionary - [Status: Released - 19/05/2009]
Chapter 02 - The Meeting (Part 1) - [Status: In Progress - 75%]
Chapter 03 - The Meeting (Part 2) - [Status: In Progress - 51%]
Chapter 04 - Change of Heart - [Status: On Going - 0%]

The info on chapters will be updated after their releases.

[uekipheonix]

I have read the fisrt chapter and I have to admit the story line is well planned.
the charecters also seem to fit togethor well.
Overall i see good potential in your creation. :)

Just keep on relesing chapters and it will gradually improve to be a very good manga.
Even the super populer manga became populer after few volumes are out, so you got a long way ahead of you and we will be there if you need any encouragement ^^

-Ueki-

[night_vision]

Originally Posted by uekipheonix

I have read the fisrt chapter and I have to admit the story line is well planned.
the charecters also seem to fit togethor well.
Overall i see good potential in your creation. :)

Just keep on relesing chapters and it will gradually improve to be a very good manga.
Even the super populer manga became populer after few volumes are out, so you got a long way ahead of you and we will be there if you need any encouragement ^^

-Ueki-

yup i agree with Ueki = D it was great. keep it up with hard work ^.^
+rep for you.

[Maggik]

thanks for rep and bump :3

I though that topic was going totally down xD

[uekipheonix]

well its still the beginning , ppl will post more here after fer chapters are out ^^

[Maggik]

The first three chapters work as introduction to the main story, so the 2nd and 3rd chapters will be released together 'cause I'm working on both of them atm..

[Titanas]

I am sure that it will be awesome :-)
I can't w8 to finish it Maggik,wish you best luck.

Take Care

[alastor]

Cool, Maggik, i see that DMC has effect on your manga. ( What can be better then guys with swords, Devil Triggers, killing vampires and demons ? ) Good luck with making next chapters !