Some of my freestyles

versusmc · 10-05-2008, 09:44 PM

Yea, i suck in English...

Trip into the past

Now that i put together the pieces of the puzzle,
all i see in my short life is pain,misery,hustle...
day after day living with hope that this day will be better
Now i realise it won't...It'll be like this forever.
Nothing in the morning except pain,suffering and misery
So why should i wake up again?That's how i see
the things,so clear and yet frightening at the same time
so it's back behind the mic,the same rhyme in the same line...
Only a different language,but the emotions are the same:
Loneliness,Depression...
and in my thoughts there's only 1 person to blame!!!
Why god?Why do i have to suffer?
Is there a cause?Or are these scars just s'posed to make me tougher?
This agony is too much, i can't handle this pain!
I tried, yet all my attempts were in vain...

And once again i pick up the shattered fragments of my pride,
Feeling stronger since now i have someone by my side.
I've sinned many times, and i've hurt the ones who cared
about me. From Family to Friend or Foe, no one was spared.
I never realised that i was allways loved,but i failed to see
that it wasn't someone else being an idiot...it was me.

Comments: some of my freestyles comments

versusmc · 10-10-2008, 08:48 PM

Now many of you wish i would die soon
allready stabbed me thrice,still bearing the wound.
But it gon take more than a knife to take away my life
So the next time you roam,better bring a chrome!

i'm still breathing,unlike some of you bitches,
Ridin' at all ya snitches,leavin yo bitch ass with stiches.

Next time you wanna beef,pick someone your level,
unless you wanna get fucked up by the son of the devil.

So when you write your shit,don't even mention this nigga,
Cuz ima bad motherfucker,my finger on the trigger.

To All of you wanna-be-thugs,don't even try to diss
cuz it wont be my grave the priest's gon kiss.

And i aint goin all out,cuz there are a lot of reasons why should i not
I don't even bother rhyming anyways,you motherfuckers allready got shot.

....not my best,but it's just something i had to say.

comments: some of my freestyles comments

versusmc · 10-21-2008, 06:35 PM

Death

I'm still breathing...but the people i love are not,
starring at my cousin's grave,3 years ago he got shot...
and now my homie died,why did it have 2 be this way?
Oh why god?For what did i pray?
I was living my life,never wanted death even for my foes
and never thought it'd be one of my own it'll chose*
sittin' on the corner with the gang,getting high
and one of the guys died...
Me?Was just starrin' with blank eyes-i'm gangsta,i can't cry...
Watched Nenad's face turn grey,and his body turn cold
And why???Because of the same rocks he sold!

Never thought it'll happen,from just another shot from the needle,
never thought that day'll come,that we'll feel the evil
that Heroin represents!Thought it was real just in the stories
till that fairy tale came alive and took down one of my homies...
and now i got the police on my back,asking questions,being suspicious,
I hate them bitches!!!And even some of my homies...they turned snitches
Life is vicious....but even so i'm still starring with an empty heart and blank eyes
surviving till the sunrise,living only to die...

Rest in peace Nenad!You gave me guidance on the streets!
So i dedicate to you this freestyle,
this Rhytm And Rhyme,
as long as my heart beats...

*mispelled on purpose

versusmc · 11-18-2008, 08:28 PM

It's tha V-boi back on the mic n beats,
packing lyrical heat,faved by the streets.
U know the name,u know what it means,
u know who's tha numero uno on this Hip-hop scene.
Making a lyrical splatter,try to follow up on it sonny
In this game for the love dawg,fuck the money
and why should i be censored?i'm only speaking the truth
So to hell with this system,but still the future belongs to the youth.
No,i'm not inspired,and i don't care about the pencil
why should i?i write rhymes directly on the mic,still suspenseful.
I may suck in english,but just watch the flow
liquid like wash'n'go,i''m the fearless hoe.
The notorious MC,u never seen someone on my level,
IQ a zillion,Clever like the devil.
And that's all i say,no need for a finishing line
getting 25 to life,each rhyme is a crime.

10-05-2008, 09:44 PM	#1 (permalink)
versusmc VersuS Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Skopje,Macedonia,Europe Age: 16 Posts: 130 Rep Power: 0	Some of my freestyles Yea, i suck in English... Trip into the past Now that i put together the pieces of the puzzle, all i see in my short life is pain,misery,hustle... day after day living with hope that this day will be better Now i realise it won't...It'll be like this forever. Nothing in the morning except pain,suffering and misery So why should i wake up again?That's how i see the things,so clear and yet frightening at the same time so it's back behind the mic,the same rhyme in the same line... Only a different language,but the emotions are the same: Loneliness,Depression... and in my thoughts there's only 1 person to blame!!! Why god?Why do i have to suffer? Is there a cause?Or are these scars just s'posed to make me tougher? This agony is too much, i can't handle this pain! I tried, yet all my attempts were in vain... And once again i pick up the shattered fragments of my pride, Feeling stronger since now i have someone by my side. I've sinned many times, and i've hurt the ones who cared about me. From Family to Friend or Foe, no one was spared. I never realised that i was allways loved,but i failed to see that it wasn't someone else being an idiot...it was me. Comments: some of my freestyles comments __________________ Fanclubs and Claims: Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Last edited by versusmc; 10-10-2008 at 09:13 PM. Reason: no comment link

10-10-2008, 08:48 PM	#2 (permalink)
versusmc VersuS Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Skopje,Macedonia,Europe Age: 16 Posts: 130 Rep Power: 0	Still Breathing Now many of you wish i would die soon allready stabbed me thrice,still bearing the wound. But it gon take more than a knife to take away my life So the next time you roam,better bring a chrome! i'm still breathing,unlike some of you bitches, Ridin' at all ya snitches,leavin yo bitch ass with stiches. Next time you wanna beef,pick someone your level, unless you wanna get fucked up by the son of the devil. So when you write your shit,don't even mention this nigga, Cuz ima bad motherfucker,my finger on the trigger. To All of you wanna-be-thugs,don't even try to diss cuz it wont be my grave the priest's gon kiss. And i aint goin all out,cuz there are a lot of reasons why should i not I don't even bother rhyming anyways,you motherfuckers allready got shot. ....not my best,but it's just something i had to say. comments: some of my freestyles comments __________________ Fanclubs and Claims: Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Last edited by versusmc; 10-10-2008 at 09:14 PM. Reason: typo no comments link

10-21-2008, 06:35 PM	#3 (permalink)
versusmc VersuS Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Skopje,Macedonia,Europe Age: 16 Posts: 130 Rep Power: 0	Death I'm still breathing...but the people i love are not, starring at my cousin's grave,3 years ago he got shot... and now my homie died,why did it have 2 be this way? Oh why god?For what did i pray? I was living my life,never wanted death even for my foes and never thought it'd be one of my own it'll chose* sittin' on the corner with the gang,getting high and one of the guys died... Me?Was just starrin' with blank eyes-i'm gangsta,i can't cry... Watched Nenad's face turn grey,and his body turn cold And why???Because of the same rocks he sold! Never thought it'll happen,from just another shot from the needle, never thought that day'll come,that we'll feel the evil that Heroin represents!Thought it was real just in the stories till that fairy tale came alive and took down one of my homies... and now i got the police on my back,asking questions,being suspicious, I hate them bitches!!!And even some of my homies...they turned snitches Life is vicious....but even so i'm still starring with an empty heart and blank eyes surviving till the sunrise,living only to die... Rest in peace Nenad!You gave me guidance on the streets! So i dedicate to you this freestyle, this Rhytm And Rhyme, as long as my heart beats... mispelled on purpose __________________ Fanclubs and Claims: Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Last edited by versusmc; 10-21-2008 at 06:37 PM. Reason: typo*

11-18-2008, 08:28 PM	#4 (permalink)
versusmc VersuS Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Skopje,Macedonia,Europe Age: 16 Posts: 130 Rep Power: 0	It's tha V-boi back on the mic n beats, packing lyrical heat,faved by the streets. U know the name,u know what it means, u know who's tha numero uno on this Hip-hop scene. Making a lyrical splatter,try to follow up on it sonny In this game for the love dawg,fuck the money and why should i be censored?i'm only speaking the truth So to hell with this system,but still the future belongs to the youth. No,i'm not inspired,and i don't care about the pencil why should i?i write rhymes directly on the mic,still suspenseful. I may suck in english,but just watch the flow liquid like wash'n'go,i''m the fearless hoe. The notorious MC,u never seen someone on my level, IQ a zillion,Clever like the devil. And that's all i say,no need for a finishing line getting 25 to life,each rhyme is a crime. __________________ Fanclubs and Claims: Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler

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