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Old 03-08-2008, 12:07 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Corruption

this world is rotten
we're slaves of the system
doomed to work so others can make money
doomed to die poor while others live rich
you can't run from it, it's impossible to escape
the only thing you can do, is hope
hope that the system will shatter while you're still alive
hope that the system will fall
but, until then
you just have to keep on living
as a puppet of society

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2nd and 3rd poem about SnS:
Death and a warning of a Guze no Tomogara

I saw a flash of fire and a rain of embers
I heard a sword cutting through my flesh
and felled the crimson flame that engulfed me
As she cut my body and destroyed my existence
Other Guze be warned
as for the flame haired red hot eyed hunter is back
Remember her name and fear her
for she will find and destroy you
Have fear for Alastor's Flame of Heaven
Have fear for Shana


Thoughts of Shana

"Urusai! Urusai! Urusai!"
I said to him many times
but he seems immune
as he follows me and disturbs my logic
he's annoying, he's an idiot, he's just just a torch
but why do I want him to stay,
why can't I leave him or stop thinking about him
he's just a mystes, just a torch
but above all he's Yuji
and I will never let him go
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4th thing i wrote:

Attacked?

My senses are weakening and darkness covers my eyes
I fall on the floor, knowing my end is near
Why does it have to end this way
Why couldn't I fight it, or at least try to run from it
I just stood there, frozen my body as hard as stone
Blood was dripping from my cut wrists
But then, just before I died, my senses cleared
I wasn't attacked, or at least not by someone else
It was indeed my greatest enemy who eventually killed me
I realized as i saw the bloody knife still in my hand...
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i wrote these today at school:

Love

Yet another fleeting dream
Silently leaving me in it's embrace
I would give you my life
I would grant you my soul
If you would ask, I would give up on everything
Spending the rest of my life in your arms
But yet, you ignore me
you don't even see or hear me
No matter how hard I try
I'm not even noticed
Tears flow from my eyes, dropping on the ground
I'm drowning in sorrow, never to be heard of again


Suffering

Pain, sorrow and disease, the premises of death
This world is full of it
The only things that are certain
The only things we all experience
The thing we all have in common is this pain
Pain, so deep within our souls
Nothing can reach it
Nothing can cure it
The only escape from this pain
Is the thing that causes the pain
Death, the eternal slumber
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these poems are somewhat cheerier:

Trapped

Darkness surounds me
I'm all alone
I call for help, only to hear my echo in return
Trapped in this prison, caged in my mind
How long have I been here
How long will I stay here
can't see an exit, can't escape
But then suddenly, a flash of light blinds me
I stand up, breaking free from my chains
stretching my arms out to the light
the light responds, surrounds me, acts as my savior
I'm disappearing
To where I do not know
But one thing is certain
I'll never lock myself in this prisson again


Who are you?

You walk past me and my heart stops
I stop moving and look back
Who was she? did she see me? did she even notice me?
Why am I asking myself these questions?
why can't I stop staring?
I started following you
Never getting too far nor too close
observing her from a distance
watching every move she makes
hoping she would notice me
Because I'm afraid to ask
Not knowing how to live without you
Blinded by love
Dying to just know your name
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Unknown to death

I am nobody
Unknown to this world
Unknown to myself
Unknown to life nor to death
But still I linger on
Hoping to be known
Hoping to become someone
Wanting to die in peace
I'm sending death my name
I'm sending the world my feelings
These words are the message I leave behind
As I become known and vanish, never to return
Still I'm satisfied, knowing I won't be forgotten
Knowing I'm not a nobody anymore
Knowing this I smile from death
Noticed and finally known
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"You can't to do anything."
"your existence is of no meaning."
I heard that many times
I said that many times
I know it's not true
It can't be true
Still I can't stop thinking
What if it's true
And I'm really not worth anything
Not able to do anything
I sit here and cry in sorrow
Hoping they are wrong
Hoping I am wrong
Tears drip on the floor
As I lay there
My soul suffering, my heart in pain
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Questions unsolved

Ignorance tearing me apart
Questions blackening the soul
Questions blocking my senses
Questions clouding my thoughts
The more I try to find the answers
The more i seem to forget
Trapped in my mind, caged by confusion
Answers so far away, seemingly out of reach
Unable to move on, unable to change
I give up on living and slowly fade away
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Lies

Blinding my past
Guiding my future
clouding the truth
Caught in this web
I look for an answer
I look for the truth
My only escape lies within
No one can help me
This, I have to do alone
Finding my own light
Strong enough to illuminate my path
Strong enough to erase the darkness of lies
This light somewhere in my soul
Is my only way out
My only escape
From dying, without knowing what happened


The most dangerous emotion

Destroying everything in it's path
Bringer of death and despair
It will not stop
Unless it becomes it's counter side
If it is controlled, If it is calmed
Unstoppable rage
Never-ending destruction
Till it is tamed
The most fearful of emotions
The child of despair
Anger, never to be let to get out of hand
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