Some of the things i write (i know it's emo)

[DemonGod]

Corruption

this world is rotten
we're slaves of the system
doomed to work so others can make money
doomed to die poor while others live rich
you can't run from it, it's impossible to escape
the only thing you can do, is hope
hope that the system will shatter while you're still alive
hope that the system will fall
but, until then
you just have to keep on living
as a puppet of society

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[DemonGod]

2nd and 3rd poem about SnS:
Death and a warning of a Guze no Tomogara

I saw a flash of fire and a rain of embers
I heard a sword cutting through my flesh
and felled the crimson flame that engulfed me
As she cut my body and destroyed my existence
Other Guze be warned
as for the flame haired red hot eyed hunter is back
Remember her name and fear her
for she will find and destroy you
Have fear for Alastor's Flame of Heaven
Have fear for Shana


Thoughts of Shana

"Urusai! Urusai! Urusai!"
I said to him many times
but he seems immune
as he follows me and disturbs my logic
he's annoying, he's an idiot, he's just just a torch
but why do I want him to stay,
why can't I leave him or stop thinking about him
he's just a mystes, just a torch
but above all he's Yuji
and I will never let him go

[DemonGod]

4th thing i wrote:

Attacked?

My senses are weakening and darkness covers my eyes
I fall on the floor, knowing my end is near
Why does it have to end this way
Why couldn't I fight it, or at least try to run from it
I just stood there, frozen my body as hard as stone
Blood was dripping from my cut wrists
But then, just before I died, my senses cleared
I wasn't attacked, or at least not by someone else
It was indeed my greatest enemy who eventually killed me
I realized as i saw the bloody knife still in my hand...

[DemonGod]

i wrote these today at school:

Love

Yet another fleeting dream
Silently leaving me in it's embrace
I would give you my life
I would grant you my soul
If you would ask, I would give up on everything
Spending the rest of my life in your arms
But yet, you ignore me
you don't even see or hear me
No matter how hard I try
I'm not even noticed
Tears flow from my eyes, dropping on the ground
I'm drowning in sorrow, never to be heard of again


Suffering

Pain, sorrow and disease, the premises of death
This world is full of it
The only things that are certain
The only things we all experience
The thing we all have in common is this pain
Pain, so deep within our souls
Nothing can reach it
Nothing can cure it
The only escape from this pain
Is the thing that causes the pain
Death, the eternal slumber

[DemonGod]

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