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Old 03-17-2008, 03:10 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Fear

Pushing me into a corner, sending shivers down my spine
Spawned by my imagination, impersonating my dark side
Created for protection, used for torture
For everyone different yet the same
For all things that can be feared
Death, others, yourself
The thing that is feared the most
Is fear itself


Images of a war

The stench of death fills the air
Bodies litter the ground
Blood, everywhere you look
Am I the only survivor
Do I want to keep living?
After seeing this
After knowing what happened
My family, my friends, people I don't even know
They were all slaughtered before my eyes
But they gave me the worst punishment of all
They didn't kill me
They let me live
With these images burned into my mind
I'll never be able to sleep again
With these images that fill my mind
These images that haunt my dreams
I'll never forget what happened
The next sleep i will get
Is the sleep eternal
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Old 03-21-2008, 04:40 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Life is just a one way ticket to death
We all pass different stations and see different things
But in the end our destinations is the same
This is what binds us together
This is the reason for everything we do
We just want to enjoy the journey to the end
Because it's the last journey we will ever make
After death there is no return
Once we're born there's no escape
Death, the only certainty
It will come to us all
This is what we all have in common
This is the only thing we all have
A one way ticket to the afterlife
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Old 03-29-2008, 01:29 PM   #13 (permalink)
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this one is inspired by Elfen Lied:

The edge of my Sanity

"I want to die"
"I don't want to continue"
Thoughts like this haunt my mind
I can't continue like this
I'm on the edge, one push is enough
Still they continue
Pushing me around, leading me into madness
They will never leave me alone
They will always attack me
I'm falling apart
I can't hold on any longer
I'm losing the fight, and I can't stop it
As I'm beginning to lose my sanity
And start to kill
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Old 03-30-2008, 07:58 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Overflowing

Sadness, clearly visible in my eyes
Tears, flowing over my cheek
Regret, filling my soul
I feel pain deep inside my heart
I hear questions, with no answers within reach
I think of things words can't describe
Lonely in this world, fighting it alone
Win I can not, hold on i must
If I give up I'm lost
Death awaits me then
But I can't hold on
These emotions are too strong
My mind is empty
My soul is shattered
As I pick up the knife
And end it myself


The next one has the same theme:
Hope till the end

Only sadness is what I see
Only death is what I think
Only regret is what I feel
I have to go on, but I can't
I have to live, but I won't
My world is crumbling
My life is falling apart
I can't continue like this
I have to change, or else it all ends
I know it's impossible
But I keep hoping
I kept hoping
Till the end
As blood drips on the floor
and I fall down
Knowing I'm finally free


Throwing your life away

"I don't care what happens"
"It's my life, I choose what to do"
The words of the foolish
The words of the weak
Those egoistic, cursed words
Should never be used
Should never be carried out
Driving to your own destruction
Taking everybody around you with you
One selfish act after another
Unable to realise the truth
Not strong enough to handle it
Fooling yourself with lies
Treating them as though they were true
Living in the past, not thinking of the future


The next poem is like a reaction to the previous:
Stop

Stop living in the past
Think about the future
You can't go on like this
Stop, think and listen
What do you want to do
How do you want to live on
Not like this, you know that
Don't run away, don't step back
You have to face it
You have to brave it
Or else you'll crumble
And fall into madness
You have to get things straight
You have to keep on living
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Old 04-09-2008, 05:20 PM   #15 (permalink)
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i made this one with teen4truth's help

Betrayal

An attack from nowhere
A stab in the back
I trusted you
I told you my feelings
I cared for you
And yet, you used me
I was no more than a tool
Discardable, replaceable
I shall never forgive you for this
But I can't believe you did this
We shared so much
And experienced all these things
But the facts still stand
You betrayed me
And I can't do anything else than watch
Watch how my best friend becomes my most hated enemy
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Old 04-10-2008, 05:53 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Burning love

I can't stop thinking about you
I can't stop caring for you
I know what I want now
I no longer want to just protect you
I want to fight with you
Always standing by your side
Never swaying from my path again
I hope you'll come to me
As I'm finally ready
I'll confess my feelings to you
And await your answer
Your answer to my burning love


I was feeling kind of depressed today and because of that i wrote this:

Why even bother

We're foolishly living our lives
Foolishly we try to create happiness
But why do we even bother
All what we create, will disappear
All what we accomplish, will be forgotten
All that lives, will eventually die
Yet, we foolishly try to live a happy life
Desperately we try to ignore the darkness before us
As we walk towards our own destruction
With that ignorant smile on our face
And our eyes that can't, no, don't want to see the truth
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Old 04-18-2008, 09:17 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Changing

My past covered in shadows
My future filled with doubt
Where will my life bring me
Why do I continue like this
I know what happened in the past
I know the future will be the same
If I don't change my life, I'm doomed
If I don't alter my habits, it's inevitable
It's hard, nearly impossible, but i have to do it
To save myself
To spare everyone who cares for me
I have to change
I have to sway from my old path
The path that would eventually lead to my own destruction
And the pain of everyone around me
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one of chieko's posts inspired me to write this:

Powerless

I can't take this anymore
I don't want to see this anymore
It hurts, seeing her like this
This pain, I can't ignore it
I don't want to see her suffer
I want to help her
I want to do anything I can for her
I want to make her feel better
Or at least share some of her pain
But I can't
I'm unable to help, unable to do something
I'm chained, stuck, unable to move
I can only watch as she suffers
I can only see how she struggles
I'm feeling powerless
I'm feeling useless
As I'm unable to help the one person I love
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Lonely


Alone in the darkness
not knowing when it will be over
I see people walking by
But they don't notice me
They don't see me struggle
They don't hear me cry
They don't know what i feel
In this darkness i have to live
Against the shadows i have to fight
Alone, tired, ignored, forgotten
No one helps me
No one wants to
As i try to protect myself
Hoping I will find someone who notices
and sets me free from my loneliness
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uuuhm, did you read the guide to posting fan fiction?
you have to create your own thread and a separate thread in the comments and critics section if you want to get comments and/or critics.

~Fan Fiction Section Rules and Info: READ BEFORE POSTING A STORY, POETRY, OR COMMENT~
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