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well? if you have a comment, fire away
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I am not good with criticizing literature, so instead I give you spelling corrections. Some of the grammar (like 'he's annoying, he's an idiot, he's just just a torch didn't seem right, but since some poems ignore grammar. I assumed they were intentional.) but, until then or at least try to run from it
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i will correct those mistakes, i always read over them
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=) they have a nice feel to it and the Shana one is quite unique and uv pointed out the obvious in a creative way =D good work demongod
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thanks ^_^
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so any new entries that we can enjoy reading?
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still thinking of one, normally i come across a sentence that acts as the basis for the poem but i had no luck recently....
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so is it safe that I assume you lack the information to write one down? if so yes most renowned writers do need some time to get the "fire" alive
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yeah, getting the right feeling and sentence can take a couple of hours or sometimes a day, getting the poem right after getting the sentence only takes 15 minutes or so.
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iv read your latest entry its more about of battle this time I am making a wild guess here that u are inspired by some scene in SNS or a movie that u just watched?
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