03-08-2008, 11:09 AM
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| Koyuki <3   Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: trapped in a fuzetsu somewhere in the Netherlands (sadly) Age: 16
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03-08-2008, 11:53 AM
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| Vampire Knight  | I am not good with criticizing literature, so instead I give you spelling corrections. Some of the grammar (like 'he's annoying, he's an idiot, he's just just a torch didn't seem right, but since some poems ignore grammar. I assumed they were intentional.) Quote:
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03-08-2008, 12:40 PM
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| Koyuki <3 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: trapped in a fuzetsu somewhere in the Netherlands (sadly) Age: 16
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03-12-2008, 04:56 AM
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| Vanguard   | =) they have a nice feel to it and the Shana one is quite unique and uv pointed out the obvious in a creative way =D good work demongod
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03-12-2008, 02:01 PM
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| Koyuki <3 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: trapped in a fuzetsu somewhere in the Netherlands (sadly) Age: 16
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03-14-2008, 05:15 PM
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| Koyuki <3 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: trapped in a fuzetsu somewhere in the Netherlands (sadly) Age: 16
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Rep Power: 572 Credits: 59,021 | still thinking of one, normally i come across a sentence that acts as the basis for the poem but i had no luck recently....
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03-14-2008, 05:31 PM
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| Vanguard | so is it safe that I assume you lack the information to write one down? if so yes most renowned writers do need some time to get the "fire" alive
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