04-08-2008, 02:35 AM
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| Bélias  Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Missouri, USA
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Rep Power: 206    |  You can get payed to cosplay?! maybe you could do something about friends and your perception of friendship...but I need to read some more of your stuff tonight so I can see what you already have covered.
__________________ I'm a Creationist because of personal spiritual experience and because of science. Want to discuss creation/evolution? Feel free to message me.  A ship on a voyage could sink in the deep A ship in the shallow could crack on the reef Only ashore is it safe where it is built... But only ashore is it useless. -from Dream by GS Megaphone |
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04-08-2008, 11:08 AM
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| Koyuki 愛してる <3   Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In my dreams, together with her Age: 16
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Rep Power: 834   | yes you can get payed to cosplay, they have those costume cafe's friendship, uuhm, i think i could try that, maybe i could add something with betrayal, or i could try to make a happy poem, for the difference.
__________________  thanks a lot sano ^^  thanks de-kun ^^ My claimed characters ^^ Spoiler Some of the things I've written: http://www.animea.net/forums/f50/som...w-s-emo-17252/ Place comments for those things here: http://www.animea.net/forums/f51/som...critics-17253/ My FC's :3: Spoiler *BIG UPDATE* AnimeA's family tree (if something's wrong pm me): Spoiler My personality tests (six now... i really need to quit this habit xD) Spoiler i wrote these for you Koyuki ^^ Spoiler the rest of my sig: Spoiler Last edited by DemonGod; 04-14-2008 at 02:41 PM. |
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04-08-2008, 11:25 PM
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| Bélias Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Missouri, USA
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Rep Power: 206 | sure sounds good! Tell me when you get it/them up.
__________________ I'm a Creationist because of personal spiritual experience and because of science. Want to discuss creation/evolution? Feel free to message me. A ship on a voyage could sink in the deep A ship in the shallow could crack on the reef Only ashore is it safe where it is built... But only ashore is it useless. -from Dream by GS Megaphone |
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04-09-2008, 05:22 PM
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| Koyuki 愛してる <3 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In my dreams, together with her Age: 16
Posts: 3,104
Rep Power: 834 | done, what do you think?
__________________ thanks a lot sano ^^ thanks de-kun ^^ My claimed characters ^^ Spoiler Some of the things I've written: http://www.animea.net/forums/f50/som...w-s-emo-17252/ Place comments for those things here: http://www.animea.net/forums/f51/som...critics-17253/ My FC's :3: Spoiler *BIG UPDATE* AnimeA's family tree (if something's wrong pm me): Spoiler My personality tests (six now... i really need to quit this habit xD) Spoiler i wrote these for you Koyuki ^^ Spoiler the rest of my sig: Spoiler |
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04-09-2008, 05:48 PM
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| Bélias Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Missouri, USA
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Rep Power: 206 | Good job! You did it with the same honesty and clarity that I like so much...and now my name is in dg's poem thread! Woohoo! So "trapped" has me curious...does the light represent anything specific?
__________________ I'm a Creationist because of personal spiritual experience and because of science. Want to discuss creation/evolution? Feel free to message me. A ship on a voyage could sink in the deep A ship in the shallow could crack on the reef Only ashore is it safe where it is built... But only ashore is it useless. -from Dream by GS Megaphone |
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04-09-2008, 06:32 PM
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| Koyuki 愛してる <3 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In my dreams, together with her Age: 16
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Rep Power: 834 | that one was written, well kinda as an experiment. i just tried stuff that sounded good and it doesn't have any personal meaning to me like the other poems.
__________________ thanks a lot sano ^^ thanks de-kun ^^ My claimed characters ^^ Spoiler Some of the things I've written: http://www.animea.net/forums/f50/som...w-s-emo-17252/ Place comments for those things here: http://www.animea.net/forums/f51/som...critics-17253/ My FC's :3: Spoiler *BIG UPDATE* AnimeA's family tree (if something's wrong pm me): Spoiler My personality tests (six now... i really need to quit this habit xD) Spoiler i wrote these for you Koyuki ^^ Spoiler the rest of my sig: Spoiler |
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04-09-2008, 06:42 PM
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| ~Akatsuki GFX~   Join Date: May 2007 Age: 23
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Rep Power: 256 | I read about half of your poems so far. I like your style. They seem to have nice flow and they don't get too wordy. I also like the length you use in most cases. I prefer shorter poems to longer ones, they seem to send the message a little better.
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04-21-2008, 06:53 AM
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| Chaos  Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: behind you.....
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Rep Power: 30 | the simplicity of the words relayed quite a huge impact on me as I was reading your last poem. It suggest ones helplessness to some circumstances... and it does happen u know...
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04-21-2008, 04:48 PM
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| Koyuki 愛してる <3 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In my dreams, together with her Age: 16
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Rep Power: 834 | is that a positive or a negative comment? that sounds like some kind of accusation.
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