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10-12-2008, 11:23 AM	#81 (permalink)
DemonGod Koyuki 愛してる <3 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In my dreams, together with her Age: 16 Posts: 3,104 Rep Power: 834	hmm... i haven't wrote something in quite sometime now :/ i really need to start writing again xD __________________ thanks a lot sano ^^ thanks de-kun ^^ My claimed characters ^^ Spoiler so shortly summarised in 1 pic xD: Spoiler Some of the things I've written: http://www.animea.net/forums/f50/som...w-s-emo-17252/ Place comments for those things here: http://www.animea.net/forums/f51/som...critics-17253/ My FC's :3: Spoiler proud leader of the proud member of the: no banner...: proud leader of the Konata Izumi FanClub proud member of the Higurashi FanClub proud member of the Rozen Maiden FanClub BIG UPDATE AnimeA's family tree (if something's wrong pm me): Spoiler Large version: Spoiler Small version: Spoiler My personality tests (six now... i really need to quit this habit xD) Spoiler Which Final Fantasy Character Are You? "Blue You are calm and controlled. You are also very sweet and get along with others well. Sometimes others do not understand why you are so nice and think you have a hidden agenda. If you do...thats to bad, but if you don't you have nothing to worry about! =]" twilight test: "You are Edward! You are extremely good-looking and loving with excellent taste in music. Apparently your hobbies include music, fastness, and Bella. ^.~" seems she was right about me >.> but i would replace the Bella hobby with Koyuki ;) o.o vampire test: You're a vampire bat. Aww... who's the cutest-wutest vampire in the world? You are! Normal vampires tend to be cranky and mean, but you're a sweet, sensitive little thing. You don't want to live in a drafty old castle; you'd rather hang out somewhere tropical with all of your friends. When you get hungry, instead of biting big holes in someone's neck, you make two teeny holes in their finger and lap up the blood with your tongue. If you could just shake that unfortunate habit of feeding on people while they're sleeping, you'd probably be the most popular pet on the planet -- you're fuzzy, you fit in a handbag, and you fly! i wrote these for you Koyuki ^^ Spoiler Close but far away My thoughts always where you are My wishes spent on meeting you I talk to you everyday Share my feelings Spill my thoughts Spend every second i can with you But yet we're separated Unable to see each other Unable to hear each other I can feel my heartbeat And somewhere i feel yours As i send my love out to you Hoping we'll finally meet an ocean apart I'm always there Right by your side Never leaving Never parting I can feel your close Always near me This feeling inside My heart calls for you I awake from my dream And face reality It's cruel, I know But it can't be helped Because you're in fact far away an ocean apart a change for the better I always thought, my life had no meaning I always thought, it wouldn't matter if I died Nothing to live for, nothing to fight for Nothing to cherish, nothing to protect But I have changed, my life has changed I have something to live for, to fight for Something to cherish, something to protect Ever since I met you Ever since I spoke these words I love you and I will always do love you have no idea what you're doing to me whenever i think about you my heart beats like crazy whenever i talk to you everything else disappears i don't really care about myself anymore i only care about you because as long as you're okay so am i when you're happy, i am when you're sad, i am too and i will try to cheer you up because i want you to be happy above all that's all i want because i love you and i need you more than i need myself the rest of my sig: Spoiler Other signatures by de-kun and tama-san: Spoiler More pics!! XD Spoiler How to not open a door XD Spoiler

10-13-2008, 03:05 AM	#82 (permalink)
chris-chan Chaos Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 118 Rep Power: 104	It's okay. I go through times like that too. __________________

11-04-2008, 03:45 AM	#83 (permalink)
bonvnguyen ~Shinmei-ryū Swordmaster~ Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Mahora academy. Protecting Ojou-sama Age: 17 Posts: 2,677 Rep Power: 1132	simply take your time to think of a theme/concept you want to write about DG and you'll eventually come up with something to write about. It can be a short story, a poem or even a riddle or so :) __________________ I will be in and out due to school work and the new WoW Lich King expansion. Regards: Bonvnguyen Latest: My Animea contribution fanclubs and uploads here! Spoiler My official IRC downloading guide: Spoiler http://www.animea.net/forums/f15/irc...97/#post392442 Character Claims: Spoiler my animea character claim claimed from the negima FC + proud owner of the club Claimed in the soul eater fanclub by me + proud owner of the club. Claimed off the fate/stay night fanclub Proud Founder of the following clubs: Soul Eater, Mac F, ZnT, Studio Ghibli Negima and new clannad Fanclub so far! Spoiler We've trained hard for this! Shinigami and Death the Kid wants you! Join the Soul Eater Fanclub Today and become one with Shibusen! http://www.animea.net/forums/f37/shi...fanclub-24455/ Other Fanclubs founded by me: Spoiler Join the macross frontier fanclub, For all your 3D Robotech action/music! http://www.animea.net/forums/f37/off...fanclub-23933/ Join the Zero no Tsukaima Fanclub! For all your Saito/Louise Ecchi needs! http://www.animea.net/forums/f37/off...fanclub-25004/ Join the Negima Fanclub For all your magic contract needs! http://www.animea.net/forums/f37/off...59/#post395365 Join the Studio Ghibli Fanclub to discuss and become part of Studio Ghibli's epic films: http://www.animea.net/forums/f37/off...fanclub-26567/ Join the New Clannad Fanclub! The After story is getting underway :P http://www.animea.net/forums/f37/new...fanclub-26926/ My Animea Uploads: Spoiler My Anime Music Collection download thread. 1980-2005: http://www.animea.net/forums/f38/yuk...95/#post385208 Macross Frontier http://www.animea.net/forums/f55/mac...31/#post341474 Zero no Tsukaima Season 3: http://www.animea.net/forums/f55/zer...d-links-22711/ Code Geass R2: http://www.animea.net/forums/f25/cod...d-links-22712/ Lucky Star OVA: http://www.animea.net/forums/f25/luc...26/#post410473 My Studio Ghibli Collection: http://www.animea.net/forums/f25/bon...lection-26514/ Gundam 00 Season 2 Downloads: http://www.animea.net/forums/f55/gun...wnloads-26643/ To Aru Majutsu no Index (New Series) http://www.animea.net/forums/f55/aru...19/#post414978 Ga-rei Zero (New Series) http://www.animea.net/forums/f37/off...fanclub-28707/ The rest of my sig: Spoiler My Top 7 Anime Spoiler 1. Soul Eater 2. Code Geass 3. Macross Frontier 4. Welcome to the NHK 5. Negima Series 6. Lucky Star 7. School Rumble Fanclubs: Spoiler Animea Spoiler My Recently Watched Anime: Spoiler My Whole Anime List: http://myanimelist.net/animelist/bonvnguyen Aboutme:http://www.animea.net/forums/f18/bon...73/#post300088 Current: Signitures made by me = Bonvnguyen Other works: Spoiler Old sigs: Spoiler

11-04-2008, 06:08 AM	#84 (permalink)
DemonGod Koyuki 愛してる <3 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In my dreams, together with her Age: 16 Posts: 3,104 Rep Power: 834	yeah, i know ^^ __________________ thanks a lot sano ^^ thanks de-kun ^^ My claimed characters ^^ Spoiler so shortly summarised in 1 pic xD: Spoiler Some of the things I've written: http://www.animea.net/forums/f50/som...w-s-emo-17252/ Place comments for those things here: http://www.animea.net/forums/f51/som...critics-17253/ My FC's :3: Spoiler proud leader of the proud member of the: no banner...: proud leader of the Konata Izumi FanClub proud member of the Higurashi FanClub proud member of the Rozen Maiden FanClub BIG UPDATE AnimeA's family tree (if something's wrong pm me): Spoiler Large version: Spoiler Small version: Spoiler My personality tests (six now... i really need to quit this habit xD) Spoiler Which Final Fantasy Character Are You? "Blue You are calm and controlled. You are also very sweet and get along with others well. Sometimes others do not understand why you are so nice and think you have a hidden agenda. If you do...thats to bad, but if you don't you have nothing to worry about! =]" twilight test: "You are Edward! You are extremely good-looking and loving with excellent taste in music. Apparently your hobbies include music, fastness, and Bella. ^.~" seems she was right about me >.> but i would replace the Bella hobby with Koyuki ;) o.o vampire test: You're a vampire bat. Aww... who's the cutest-wutest vampire in the world? You are! Normal vampires tend to be cranky and mean, but you're a sweet, sensitive little thing. You don't want to live in a drafty old castle; you'd rather hang out somewhere tropical with all of your friends. When you get hungry, instead of biting big holes in someone's neck, you make two teeny holes in their finger and lap up the blood with your tongue. If you could just shake that unfortunate habit of feeding on people while they're sleeping, you'd probably be the most popular pet on the planet -- you're fuzzy, you fit in a handbag, and you fly! i wrote these for you Koyuki ^^ Spoiler Close but far away My thoughts always where you are My wishes spent on meeting you I talk to you everyday Share my feelings Spill my thoughts Spend every second i can with you But yet we're separated Unable to see each other Unable to hear each other I can feel my heartbeat And somewhere i feel yours As i send my love out to you Hoping we'll finally meet an ocean apart I'm always there Right by your side Never leaving Never parting I can feel your close Always near me This feeling inside My heart calls for you I awake from my dream And face reality It's cruel, I know But it can't be helped Because you're in fact far away an ocean apart a change for the better I always thought, my life had no meaning I always thought, it wouldn't matter if I died Nothing to live for, nothing to fight for Nothing to cherish, nothing to protect But I have changed, my life has changed I have something to live for, to fight for Something to cherish, something to protect Ever since I met you Ever since I spoke these words I love you and I will always do love you have no idea what you're doing to me whenever i think about you my heart beats like crazy whenever i talk to you everything else disappears i don't really care about myself anymore i only care about you because as long as you're okay so am i when you're happy, i am when you're sad, i am too and i will try to cheer you up because i want you to be happy above all that's all i want because i love you and i need you more than i need myself the rest of my sig: Spoiler Other signatures by de-kun and tama-san: Spoiler More pics!! XD Spoiler How to not open a door XD Spoiler

11-20-2008, 02:18 PM	#85 (permalink)
Ockedy Chaos Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Perth Australia Posts: 100 Rep Power: 238	aww.. Your poem's are so nice, your really good papa ^_^ __________________ I AM A GIRL, DAMN IT!!! Fan clubs Spoiler AA family tree :D Spoiler Some of my stuff Spoiler Can’t help but wait for you <3

11-20-2008, 06:47 PM	#86 (permalink)
DemonGod Koyuki 愛してる <3 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In my dreams, together with her Age: 16 Posts: 3,104 Rep Power: 834	thanks ockedy ^^ __________________ thanks a lot sano ^^ thanks de-kun ^^ My claimed characters ^^ Spoiler so shortly summarised in 1 pic xD: Spoiler Some of the things I've written: http://www.animea.net/forums/f50/som...w-s-emo-17252/ Place comments for those things here: http://www.animea.net/forums/f51/som...critics-17253/ My FC's :3: Spoiler proud leader of the proud member of the: no banner...: proud leader of the Konata Izumi FanClub proud member of the Higurashi FanClub proud member of the Rozen Maiden FanClub BIG UPDATE AnimeA's family tree (if something's wrong pm me): Spoiler Large version: Spoiler Small version: Spoiler My personality tests (six now... i really need to quit this habit xD) Spoiler Which Final Fantasy Character Are You? "Blue You are calm and controlled. You are also very sweet and get along with others well. Sometimes others do not understand why you are so nice and think you have a hidden agenda. If you do...thats to bad, but if you don't you have nothing to worry about! =]" twilight test: "You are Edward! You are extremely good-looking and loving with excellent taste in music. Apparently your hobbies include music, fastness, and Bella. ^.~" seems she was right about me >.> but i would replace the Bella hobby with Koyuki ;) o.o vampire test: You're a vampire bat. Aww... who's the cutest-wutest vampire in the world? You are! Normal vampires tend to be cranky and mean, but you're a sweet, sensitive little thing. You don't want to live in a drafty old castle; you'd rather hang out somewhere tropical with all of your friends. When you get hungry, instead of biting big holes in someone's neck, you make two teeny holes in their finger and lap up the blood with your tongue. If you could just shake that unfortunate habit of feeding on people while they're sleeping, you'd probably be the most popular pet on the planet -- you're fuzzy, you fit in a handbag, and you fly! i wrote these for you Koyuki ^^ Spoiler Close but far away My thoughts always where you are My wishes spent on meeting you I talk to you everyday Share my feelings Spill my thoughts Spend every second i can with you But yet we're separated Unable to see each other Unable to hear each other I can feel my heartbeat And somewhere i feel yours As i send my love out to you Hoping we'll finally meet an ocean apart I'm always there Right by your side Never leaving Never parting I can feel your close Always near me This feeling inside My heart calls for you I awake from my dream And face reality It's cruel, I know But it can't be helped Because you're in fact far away an ocean apart a change for the better I always thought, my life had no meaning I always thought, it wouldn't matter if I died Nothing to live for, nothing to fight for Nothing to cherish, nothing to protect But I have changed, my life has changed I have something to live for, to fight for Something to cherish, something to protect Ever since I met you Ever since I spoke these words I love you and I will always do love you have no idea what you're doing to me whenever i think about you my heart beats like crazy whenever i talk to you everything else disappears i don't really care about myself anymore i only care about you because as long as you're okay so am i when you're happy, i am when you're sad, i am too and i will try to cheer you up because i want you to be happy above all that's all i want because i love you and i need you more than i need myself the rest of my sig: Spoiler Other signatures by de-kun and tama-san: Spoiler More pics!! XD Spoiler How to not open a door XD Spoiler

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