a shakugan no shana poem written by me

DemonGod · 01-16-2008, 03:57 PM

Death and a warning of a Guze no Tomogara

I saw a flash of fire and a rain of embers
I heard a sword cutting through my flesh
and felled the crimson flame that engulfed me
As she cut my body and destroyed my existence
Other Guze be warned
as for the flame haired red hot eyed hunter is back
Remember her name and fear her
for she will find and destroy you
Have fear for Alastor's Flame of Heaven
Have fear for Shana

What do you think??

Sin-hunter · 02-12-2008, 11:40 PM

I like it. It's cool I love how you say "a rain of embers" nicely done keep up the great work ^.^

DemonGod · 02-17-2008, 02:00 PM

woohoo a positive comment

MrKorrrrn · 02-18-2008, 06:33 AM

Impressed it's good

But how can other be warned if ur already cuted down? :P

DemonGod · 02-18-2008, 07:20 AM

these are his last words
i hate the 25 characters limit

Barzillal · 02-19-2008, 07:56 AM

lol hail true shana fan boy xD

DemonGod · 02-19-2008, 05:34 PM

speaking of that where did my custom title go? i didn't change it

DemonGod · 02-19-2008, 08:27 PM

I made this one up after i had ten minutes left after at test:

Thoughts of Shana

"Urusai! Urusai! Urusai!"
I said to him many times
but he seems immune
as he follows me and disturbs my logic
he's annoying, he's an idiot, he's just just a torch
but why do I want him to stay,
why can't I leave him or stop thinking about him
he's just a mystes, just a torch
but above all he's Yuji
and I will never let him go

Barzillal · 02-19-2008, 09:29 PM

as for your custom title I have no idea but im guessing U need to have 800 perhaps a thousand to change ur title

DemonGod · 02-20-2008, 07:03 AM

i decided to look it up and it says i need 200 posts to change my title.
but here's the weird thing when my normal title should be "unknown" i could change my title, but when i became "chaos" i couldn't anymore.

01-16-2008, 03:57 PM	#1 (permalink)
DemonGod Koyuki 愛してる <3 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In my dreams, together with her Age: 16 Posts: 3,116 Rep Power: 834	a shakugan no shana poem written by me Death and a warning of a Guze no Tomogara I saw a flash of fire and a rain of embers I heard a sword cutting through my flesh and felled the crimson flame that engulfed me As she cut my body and destroyed my existence Other Guze be warned as for the flame haired red hot eyed hunter is back Remember her name and fear her for she will find and destroy you Have fear for Alastor's Flame of Heaven Have fear for Shana What do you think??

02-18-2008, 07:20 AM	#5 (permalink)
DemonGod Koyuki 愛してる <3 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In my dreams, together with her Age: 16 Posts: 3,116 Rep Power: 834	these are his last words i hate the 25 characters limit __________________ thanks a lot sano ^^ thanks de-kun ^^ My claimed characters ^^ Spoiler so shortly summarised in 1 pic xD: Spoiler Some of the things I've written: http://www.animea.net/forums/f50/som...w-s-emo-17252/ Place comments for those things here: http://www.animea.net/forums/f51/som...critics-17253/ My FC's :3: Spoiler proud leader of the proud member of the: no banner...: proud leader of the Konata Izumi FanClub proud member of the Higurashi FanClub proud member of the Rozen Maiden FanClub BIG UPDATE AnimeA's family tree (if something's wrong pm me): Spoiler Large version: Spoiler Small version: Spoiler My personality tests (six now... i really need to quit this habit xD) Spoiler Which Final Fantasy Character Are You? "Blue You are calm and controlled. You are also very sweet and get along with others well. Sometimes others do not understand why you are so nice and think you have a hidden agenda. If you do...thats to bad, but if you don't you have nothing to worry about! =]" twilight test: "You are Edward! You are extremely good-looking and loving with excellent taste in music. Apparently your hobbies include music, fastness, and Bella. ^.~" seems she was right about me >.> but i would replace the Bella hobby with Koyuki ;) o.o vampire test: You're a vampire bat. Aww... who's the cutest-wutest vampire in the world? You are! Normal vampires tend to be cranky and mean, but you're a sweet, sensitive little thing. You don't want to live in a drafty old castle; you'd rather hang out somewhere tropical with all of your friends. When you get hungry, instead of biting big holes in someone's neck, you make two teeny holes in their finger and lap up the blood with your tongue. If you could just shake that unfortunate habit of feeding on people while they're sleeping, you'd probably be the most popular pet on the planet -- you're fuzzy, you fit in a handbag, and you fly! i wrote these for you Koyuki ^^ Spoiler Close but far away My thoughts always where you are My wishes spent on meeting you I talk to you everyday Share my feelings Spill my thoughts Spend every second i can with you But yet we're separated Unable to see each other Unable to hear each other I can feel my heartbeat And somewhere i feel yours As i send my love out to you Hoping we'll finally meet an ocean apart I'm always there Right by your side Never leaving Never parting I can feel your close Always near me This feeling inside My heart calls for you I awake from my dream And face reality It's cruel, I know But it can't be helped Because you're in fact far away an ocean apart a change for the better I always thought, my life had no meaning I always thought, it wouldn't matter if I died Nothing to live for, nothing to fight for Nothing to cherish, nothing to protect But I have changed, my life has changed I have something to live for, to fight for Something to cherish, something to protect Ever since I met you Ever since I spoke these words I love you and I will always do love you have no idea what you're doing to me whenever i think about you my heart beats like crazy whenever i talk to you everything else disappears i don't really care about myself anymore i only care about you because as long as you're okay so am i when you're happy, i am when you're sad, i am too and i will try to cheer you up because i want you to be happy above all that's all i want because i love you and i need you more than i need myself the rest of my sig: Spoiler Other signatures by de-kun and tama-san: Spoiler More pics!! XD Spoiler How to not open a door XD Spoiler

02-19-2008, 07:56 AM	#6 (permalink)
Barzillal Vanguard Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Under the stairs Posts: 7,542 Rep Power: 223	lol hail true shana fan boy xD __________________ sig made by our very own de-kun I will be in and out... I have something to do ahahaha D: Christ I hate...this Fanclubs Spoiler Family Tree Spoiler

02-19-2008, 05:34 PM	#7 (permalink)
DemonGod Koyuki 愛してる <3 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In my dreams, together with her Age: 16 Posts: 3,116 Rep Power: 834	speaking of that where did my custom title go? i didn't change it __________________ thanks a lot sano ^^ thanks de-kun ^^ My claimed characters ^^ Spoiler so shortly summarised in 1 pic xD: Spoiler Some of the things I've written: http://www.animea.net/forums/f50/som...w-s-emo-17252/ Place comments for those things here: http://www.animea.net/forums/f51/som...critics-17253/ My FC's :3: Spoiler proud leader of the proud member of the: no banner...: proud leader of the Konata Izumi FanClub proud member of the Higurashi FanClub proud member of the Rozen Maiden FanClub BIG UPDATE AnimeA's family tree (if something's wrong pm me): Spoiler Large version: Spoiler Small version: Spoiler My personality tests (six now... i really need to quit this habit xD) Spoiler Which Final Fantasy Character Are You? "Blue You are calm and controlled. You are also very sweet and get along with others well. Sometimes others do not understand why you are so nice and think you have a hidden agenda. If you do...thats to bad, but if you don't you have nothing to worry about! =]" twilight test: "You are Edward! You are extremely good-looking and loving with excellent taste in music. Apparently your hobbies include music, fastness, and Bella. ^.~" seems she was right about me >.> but i would replace the Bella hobby with Koyuki ;) o.o vampire test: You're a vampire bat. Aww... who's the cutest-wutest vampire in the world? You are! Normal vampires tend to be cranky and mean, but you're a sweet, sensitive little thing. You don't want to live in a drafty old castle; you'd rather hang out somewhere tropical with all of your friends. When you get hungry, instead of biting big holes in someone's neck, you make two teeny holes in their finger and lap up the blood with your tongue. If you could just shake that unfortunate habit of feeding on people while they're sleeping, you'd probably be the most popular pet on the planet -- you're fuzzy, you fit in a handbag, and you fly! i wrote these for you Koyuki ^^ Spoiler Close but far away My thoughts always where you are My wishes spent on meeting you I talk to you everyday Share my feelings Spill my thoughts Spend every second i can with you But yet we're separated Unable to see each other Unable to hear each other I can feel my heartbeat And somewhere i feel yours As i send my love out to you Hoping we'll finally meet an ocean apart I'm always there Right by your side Never leaving Never parting I can feel your close Always near me This feeling inside My heart calls for you I awake from my dream And face reality It's cruel, I know But it can't be helped Because you're in fact far away an ocean apart a change for the better I always thought, my life had no meaning I always thought, it wouldn't matter if I died Nothing to live for, nothing to fight for Nothing to cherish, nothing to protect But I have changed, my life has changed I have something to live for, to fight for Something to cherish, something to protect Ever since I met you Ever since I spoke these words I love you and I will always do love you have no idea what you're doing to me whenever i think about you my heart beats like crazy whenever i talk to you everything else disappears i don't really care about myself anymore i only care about you because as long as you're okay so am i when you're happy, i am when you're sad, i am too and i will try to cheer you up because i want you to be happy above all that's all i want because i love you and i need you more than i need myself the rest of my sig: Spoiler Other signatures by de-kun and tama-san: Spoiler More pics!! XD Spoiler How to not open a door XD Spoiler

02-19-2008, 08:27 PM	#8 (permalink)
DemonGod Koyuki 愛してる <3 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In my dreams, together with her Age: 16 Posts: 3,116 Rep Power: 834	I made this one up after i had ten minutes left after at test: Thoughts of Shana "Urusai! Urusai! Urusai!" I said to him many times but he seems immune as he follows me and disturbs my logic he's annoying, he's an idiot, he's just just a torch but why do I want him to stay, why can't I leave him or stop thinking about him he's just a mystes, just a torch but above all he's Yuji and I will never let him go __________________ thanks a lot sano ^^ thanks de-kun ^^ My claimed characters ^^ Spoiler so shortly summarised in 1 pic xD: Spoiler Some of the things I've written: http://www.animea.net/forums/f50/som...w-s-emo-17252/ Place comments for those things here: http://www.animea.net/forums/f51/som...critics-17253/ My FC's :3: Spoiler proud leader of the proud member of the: no banner...: proud leader of the Konata Izumi FanClub proud member of the Higurashi FanClub proud member of the Rozen Maiden FanClub BIG UPDATE AnimeA's family tree (if something's wrong pm me): Spoiler Large version: Spoiler Small version: Spoiler My personality tests (six now... i really need to quit this habit xD) Spoiler Which Final Fantasy Character Are You? "Blue You are calm and controlled. You are also very sweet and get along with others well. Sometimes others do not understand why you are so nice and think you have a hidden agenda. If you do...thats to bad, but if you don't you have nothing to worry about! =]" twilight test: "You are Edward! You are extremely good-looking and loving with excellent taste in music. Apparently your hobbies include music, fastness, and Bella. ^.~" seems she was right about me >.> but i would replace the Bella hobby with Koyuki ;) o.o vampire test: You're a vampire bat. Aww... who's the cutest-wutest vampire in the world? You are! Normal vampires tend to be cranky and mean, but you're a sweet, sensitive little thing. You don't want to live in a drafty old castle; you'd rather hang out somewhere tropical with all of your friends. When you get hungry, instead of biting big holes in someone's neck, you make two teeny holes in their finger and lap up the blood with your tongue. If you could just shake that unfortunate habit of feeding on people while they're sleeping, you'd probably be the most popular pet on the planet -- you're fuzzy, you fit in a handbag, and you fly! i wrote these for you Koyuki ^^ Spoiler Close but far away My thoughts always where you are My wishes spent on meeting you I talk to you everyday Share my feelings Spill my thoughts Spend every second i can with you But yet we're separated Unable to see each other Unable to hear each other I can feel my heartbeat And somewhere i feel yours As i send my love out to you Hoping we'll finally meet an ocean apart I'm always there Right by your side Never leaving Never parting I can feel your close Always near me This feeling inside My heart calls for you I awake from my dream And face reality It's cruel, I know But it can't be helped Because you're in fact far away an ocean apart a change for the better I always thought, my life had no meaning I always thought, it wouldn't matter if I died Nothing to live for, nothing to fight for Nothing to cherish, nothing to protect But I have changed, my life has changed I have something to live for, to fight for Something to cherish, something to protect Ever since I met you Ever since I spoke these words I love you and I will always do love you have no idea what you're doing to me whenever i think about you my heart beats like crazy whenever i talk to you everything else disappears i don't really care about myself anymore i only care about you because as long as you're okay so am i when you're happy, i am when you're sad, i am too and i will try to cheer you up because i want you to be happy above all that's all i want because i love you and i need you more than i need myself the rest of my sig: Spoiler Other signatures by de-kun and tama-san: Spoiler More pics!! XD Spoiler How to not open a door XD Spoiler

02-12-2008, 11:40 PM	#2 (permalink)
Sin-hunter Meow Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Earth Posts: 26 Rep Power: 2	I like it. It's cool I love how you say "a rain of embers" nicely done keep up the great work ^.^

02-17-2008, 02:00 PM	#3 (permalink)
DemonGod Koyuki 愛してる <3 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In my dreams, together with her Age: 16 Posts: 3,116 Rep Power: 834	woohoo a positive comment

02-18-2008, 06:33 AM	#4 (permalink)
MrKorrrrn Unknown Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 3 Rep Power: 0	Impressed it's good But how can other be warned if ur already cuted down? :P

02-19-2008, 09:29 PM	#9 (permalink)
Barzillal Vanguard Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Under the stairs Posts: 7,542 Rep Power: 223	as for your custom title I have no idea but im guessing U need to have 800 perhaps a thousand to change ur title __________________ sig made by our very own de-kun I will be in and out... I have something to do ahahaha D: Christ I hate...this Fanclubs Spoiler Family Tree Spoiler