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Old 01-04-2008, 10:31 PM   #231 (permalink)
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I'm Barzillal's friend ^^ can I join the epic battle?

oooo so I will be your master then ne, Caster-Chan? xD
lol I dnt knw you
xD please dont hit me hahah

ooo welcome aboard, unknownfireice :D glad to have you aboard
now you Shizuka1704 go make a pretty profile
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Old 01-04-2008, 10:33 PM   #232 (permalink)
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Welcome on board new masters

@Tsukuyomi Niwa Just keep an eye out for your desired servant I will let you know as soon as one becomes available!

@ Shizuka, Caster is yours Just make a character profile for yourself and summon her formally :)
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Old 01-04-2008, 10:43 PM   #233 (permalink)
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well I'll do some storie thingy later, I have to work now and you shizuka stop appearing offline hahaha bye guys
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Old 01-04-2008, 10:58 PM   #234 (permalink)
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Akimoto was sitting in front of a local motel, she was angry.

Akimoto: Geesh! What's taking him so long!
Spirit: Is it really that hard to quess?
Akimoto: Of course! Nao! Why the hell he can't do anything right? Always playing with the women!

Suddenly Akimoto had shiver send down her spine!

Akimoto: Frrrr-rrr
Spirit: What's the matter chief?
Akimoto: I got a bad feeling about this, it feels like an another powerfull force has shown up...

While Akimoto was trying to think what could have caused this Archer showed up, having a black eye and covered in bruises, carrying a katana at his hand.

Akimoto: Now what did ha... why to ask... Nao?
Archer: Yeah she chased me half the way here before giving up and returning to the shrine. Oh here's your sword by the way.
Akimoto: Whoppidou!

Archer threw the katana to the Akimoto and she decided to take a quick look at the katana.

Akimoto: Quite good craftmanship if I have to say... You did steal this, did you?... Nah nevermind, this will do fine. You can take a break, meet me at the room 341 after 3 hours.

Akimoto was heading to the door.

Archer: Wait! you didn't tell me what are you going to do with that!
"You'll see, oh and take care of those bruises, it's embarrasing that my servant got beaten up by a girl" Akimoto gave an evilish smile and entered the motel. Archer grabbed a smoke from his pocket and placed it on his lips.

Arcer: I do wonder what that wise-ass is up to...
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Old 01-04-2008, 11:09 PM   #235 (permalink)
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Man... Why hasn't anyone thought of this before? Fate Stay is undoubtly a good anime and this thread's gona rock
Too bad Saber's already taken this thread is definetely cool!! I love it
well to start off;

Illyana Rinalde Dane Rozzen vonz Eizburn is my name it is long but sounds cool xD


I'm Norweigan by descent, my family had been magis for over thousands of years. I'm an accomplished mage with more than sufficient training. Although our family valued magic of much importance, previous Grail Wars had taught us one thing and that is: never rely on magic alone.
Magi's blessed and cursed with the magic circuit are trained, rigorously in battle and in magic.
we are a family that has participated in this war for as long as one can remember, and our objective is not to win the Grail for ourselves but to take it and destroy it as it caused so much pain to magis and normal people as well...
Despite my young age I have considerably high Manna and my magic and battle abilities is more than impressive... it is exceptionally well...
Now that news had reached the Ice Lands, that the grail is to take part in Japan my family with my highly trained bodyguards packed up and to get ready to partake the holy war...

Age: 18 (she might be mistaken to be 18 yrs younger... since she possessed a very young face)
Skills: Can speak 16 languages fluently although she still has her Norweigan accent while speaking Japanese, exceels im magic
her mana source is absurdly high.
Secret Weapon: Her personal bodyguard, mysterious and strong... has the strength of a servant...

Her parents died and she did not even have the chance to meet them.. for they died in the previous grail... however there are many lapses and too many unexplained things regarding her lineage and of her parent's death and biography all she knows that she looked like her mother.. .her only living relative her grandpops...


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Japan... it's beautiful ne? she said
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"Damn him." The white-robed man cursed in pain as he pulled himself back together. The worms reattached the man's limbs slowly yet painfully. "That actually hurt. It was hard to pretend I was dead while he enjoyed himself." As the white-robed man got up, he looked around for his sword. "There you are. I'm glad they didn't take you. Heh, even if they did, they can not wield it. Only a true servant of God can touch you." The sword gleamed as it's angelic voice filled the man's ears. "Pity that these men died. Even though none of them are from the Church I suppose I should pray for them. However, more present issues are in need. I'll have to contact the Church to use those weapons." As this was going on the military unit came in at that moment. The lieutenant stared in disbelief at the gory scene.
"What the hell has happened in here. Check and see if anyone survived."
"No bother, all seven of them are dead."
"Who did this? They will pay."
"Do you actually believe you can take them on? They came out of nowhere and surprised us. We didn't even have a chance to fire the Conceptual Weapons. However, I know where they are going. Gather your men. We follow them at once."
"How could you possibly know where they are going."
"You forget your place. Just follow me and move on. Take all of the dead bodies and get rid of them. Also, don't forget to take the weapons. They shall be most important in this new ordeal."
"Uh...don't you....nevermind, men get rid of the bodies and take their supplies with you."
"Yes Sir."
As the unit proceeded with the orders, the white-robed man held nothing more dear than revenge for the pain inflicted upon him.

Few hours later, Berserker felt the presence of Valkrov and Mathaeus disappear. "Princess, this is not a good sign we must leave at once."
"What happened?"
"Valkrov's and Mathaeus's presence have disappeared...much like Brigga. I assume they've died."
"But how?"
"I don't know but it isn't safe. We must stop and leave at once."
"Im sorry, but you're not going to do that. I must have a word with you." A dark-robed man appeared before them....

"Hehehehahahahaa....want to kill me again huh?" The white-robed man laughed at the destruction before him. Valkrov and Mathaeus were consumed by the holy sword, a fate similar to Brigga. The officer was speechless.
"Sir, h-ho-ho-how did this happen. I would not believed it had I not seen it for myself."
The white-robed man only smiled,"This is all God's will. Their existence was nothing more than heresy in his eyes."
"But how did you know they would be here?"
"That is simple, Brigga told me."
"Brigga, that lady in black armor? But I heard that she was consumed by that sword. Was she not?"
"Of course, however, Brigga's memory, strength, and skills still reside in this sword. The sword has taught me much."
"A talking sword huh? Okay.....Works for me I guess, but how do you know she won't come back out of that sword?"
"Come out of the sword? That is impossible. Her entire existence was consumed in to the sword. Only God himself can bring her back and I doubt he will."
"I see, but these weapons, I did not know they held such power."
"Of course you wouldn't know. This belongs to none other than the Holy Church. They have an accumulated history and are made to act in predetermined circumstances. It crushes the soul of the opposition not with a physical shock, but with a concept on a spiritual plane. Besides physical interferences, they are weapons made to affect space with a semantic, a logic. We usually use them as trump cards for the True Ancestors but the Church has determined this as a special circumstance. At least until we find out if the Holy Grail is the true Holy Grail that we have been searching for all this time. I just hope Ji-jwan has followed his part of this plot."

"Who are you? I demand a name." Sakura ordered the man to reveal himself.
"You do not need to know who I am. Just know that I am in charge of all the men that you have killed."
"Then you are the Mast..."
"What did I just say? You don't need to know who I am. Just know that there are six snipers targeted at you and that if you make any false move they have the order to shoot you, and for insurance, I'll blow this place up. I swear it. Now you don't want to get the innocent involved now would you?"
"Alright then. Speak your words and leave us. I grow tired of this."
"Of course, my apologies for this rough visit. Let me be frank: Stop killing my men. They are doing nothing harmful to you so why do you have to go out of the way just to kill them. I mean, some of these men have families to look after. Show some pity."
"PITY?" Berserker roared causing the people around them to look. "Like the pity you have shown Brigga? She was my sister."
"So? You killed one of my men. An eye for an eye. He was doing nothing more than gathering information."
"He was a spy."
"You're using ravens to spy on others. Does that give us the right to shoot them. You know we had plenty of chances to do that."
"You could not harm them even if you tried."
"Not me but a higher source could."
"You mean the church that has been supporting you all this time. I already know that they're helping you. It seems they only sent in one agent to help. Doesn't look like they have much faith in you does it?"
"I assure you that man is more than enough to handle any task. However, we have strayed from the topic at hand. I came to meet you two and ask that you do not kill any more of my men. Not your servants, not your ravens, your runes, nothing. The same applies to you 'Princess'."
"Do not mock us. Why should we follow this agreement of yours? You will die before you can even blink, Master."
"I highly doubt that. Even though the Holy Grail forbids us Masters and Servants to attack one another until everyone has been summoned that does not apply to non-related sources, like my men and the Church for example. I will have both of your words that you will no longer attack my men. I assure you that my men will not kill you in any way possible during the War."
"As if they could kill us."
"Maybe, but we are not here to discuss that. I would have both of your words now. I can tell that even though we are enemies, you two are still honorable and have such integrity that a promise you make will be binding enough. I trust that you will not break your words."
"And if we don't agree to this?
"As I said, my men will shoot you in the head, 'Princess' and fill you up with lead, if you know what I mean. They will also blow this area up. I don't want innocents involved but there were no other alternatives."
"Fine, you have my word that we will no longer attack your men, at least until the war begins."
"NO, do not accept such an agreement. I will kill him before he can even command his men to shoot."
"I will not involve the innocents that are around us. You are certainly not helping with all the shouting."
As Berserker stopped and looked around, he saw that there was a small crowd alerted by his shouting.
"My apologies Princess, fine, you have my word that I will not kill another of your men until the War officially starts."
"What about your other men and armies? Do I have your word that you will not use them to kill my men as well."
"I have said that you have my word, do not make me repeat myself."
"Just making sure, that's all. Well then I'm glad this conversation ended for the best. Take care you two. I hope you can still continue to enjoy your date. I'm sorry if my presence here has dampened the mood between you two. Well then I'll be off."
Due to the crowded streets the black-robed man easily disappeared among the crowd.
"Shall I follow him Princess?"
"No, let's not let this incident ruin the day. Let us continue with what we were doing."
"If you say so Princess."

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While his Master was off doing sword enchanting or what not, Archer decided to get a good viewpoint of Fuyuki City. After locating the tallest building, Archer scaled it in a few short leaps. From the top he could see everything, but felt as if someone was watching him. "Probably just Caster..." he thought.

After surveying the city and waiting till the sun had set, Archer materialized some new clothes and headed down to a bar. Little did he know that Nao-chan had seen him enter the bar. Luckily for Archer, Nao gave him 30 minutes or so before she barraged in and dragged him kicking and screaming out of the bar. "You shouldn't be drinking!" snapped Nao-chan.
"But... I've had a long day with you beating on me and things." whined Archer lighting a cigarette.
"Don't smoke either!" yelled Nao trying to grab Archer's lit cigarette.
"Nyuu! Mine!" growled Archer.

The two bickered for a few more minutes but Archer won the argument. Archer and Nao walked silently for awhile until Archer noticed that Nao was shivering. Without even thinking twice, Archer took off his jacket and dropped it on Nao-chan's head. "I don't want your smelly jacket!" said Nao throwing it back.
"Suit yourself." replied Archer
"You seem a bit off. Did I hit you a little too hard?"
"No... you just look like someone I knew a long time ago."
"Really? I'm prettier right?"
Archer gave Nao a blank look...
Suddenly Nao's handbag came swinging towards his face. "What's with the stupid look! It was a simple question!"

"Nao-chan, calm down! Being angry isn't good for your blood-pressure..." Archer stammered as he backed off.

"I don't care! Grrr! Bankai!"

"What the hell! Can everyone but me go bankai and get away with copyright infringement."

Back at the hotel Master Akimoto felt Archer's mana flow going haywire... At first he thought Archer had engaged another Servant, then realized that he had simply gotten owned by Nao-chan... again... "I sense that Nao-chan could be a problem..." Akimoto muttered.
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A call once again came.
"Sir, we have received information on the Servants."
"I see, well what is it?"
"We have spotted the girl Nao and Archer together. It seems as if she is hurting him."
"Hurting him, how can that be. Is she not just a normal girl?"
"All records of her seem to indicate that but it's pretty amusing watching her beat Anubis up like that."
"Hmmm...could she be a weakness of Archer's. An infatuation perhaps."
"I don't know about that sir. She just stepped on his face."
"I see, well then continue on with your work."
"Of course."
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Skullreken stood outside the geisha house looking at the paper in his hand. Hoshime said it was some form of currency called allowance . That could be used to buy things, he could buy Ellana again if he wished but he decided not to he would settle to dream about her despite being a whore she was pure at heart he felt it he would rather not taint her like that.

he continued to walk around the city the sound of steal clashing caught his attention "Servants fighting?" he asked himself running towards the sound. It was coming from a school yard there he saw fighters clad in padded black suits and masks practicing Naganinatjutsu. "Lancers!" he gasped filling with excitement he summoned his lance and shawl to cover the bottom half of his face and ran into the school yard. "Would any of you warriors do me the honor of a sparing match?" asked. His question was answered with girlish giggles a Lancers removed it's mask to reveal it was a girl "Naganinatjutsu is a womens sport and what you wield is not a naginata it's a European glave!" she declared

"That is Irrelevant" Skullreken replied "The lance no matter what variation is a noble weapon that can be used by any warrior male or female skilled or novice!" "Yeah well you don't have any protective equipment" she replied shaken by his words "My combat schooling doesn't believe in protection it teaches you to be more aware and to be better at switching between attack and defense in fact I believe that this may in fact make my art form superior to yours!" he smiled "Don't count on it "she replied throwing on her mask

She leaped at Skullreken and brought the slashing at his head with the blunt side of her blade he swayed back avoiding the slash stepped in and struck her with the butt of his lances shaft air left her mouth with a loud whoosh and she collapsed on the ground winded
The other ten students cricled around Skullreken and charged him at once

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While playing the fireworks, a sensation ran through my spine, 'I'm been summoned'

my ear and tail bust into view and at the end of each tail a fiery ball of red fire is burning.

"gravity fold and lightning strike" the view in front of me starts shifting and a clash of thunder struck down from a cloudless sky, into the void.

"bringing forth, the rift of space and time. Jump!" the void bust into a gold sphere with the ending of the enchant, which swallow me whole and disappeared.

To appear in front of the summoner which is a foreign young girl radiating with power in my eyes. Beside her, a cloaked man quickly assume a guard position.

"I'm Caster, answering your summoning." I said when the golden sphere quickly disintegrated into dust and disappeared. I can see the man already relax down a bit, but was still cautious.

Only then did i realize that i'm in a hotel room, highest grade with a living room, and a long long way from Fuyuki city.

(btw guys, i'm the rightful owner of that shrine and there is only me in it, if there is no guest visiting)

"I'm Illyana Rinalde Dane Rozzen vonz Eizburn, i will be your master from now on then."

I acknowledged with a bow.

"Master, are you planning to live here?" I asked.
"No, this is only temporary, my family have a castle in the mountains around the Fuyuki city, why ask?"
"I would happily invite you to live with me in my own shrine but there was a few nosy guys around there recently so i would rather not have anyone know of your existence, which i suspect someone already know that i got summoned. So i at least want them not to know that you are my Master."

"Ok, we should give each other's address then." Ilya said and we do exactly that.
"Hmm, thats just a minute of flying time for me."
"You can fly!?"
"Yes my Master, my profile is on post 132 if you haven't checked." (too lazy to type it so i will just do this ^^")

Then we talked in depth about each other. An hour later....

"Well, i better get back to the shrine, but before that i have to do one thing."
"Oh, Alright."
"then excuse me Master." I touched one of her hands, the one without the command spells, and chanted, black words flying, forming a 5 point star on her hand.
"What is this?"
"Its a spell, if you hold that hand to your chest and think of my name, Yuki/Caster, i will hear and will be at your side as quick as wind if not faster."
"Thank you."
"It is my duty." I smiled. "I should go back now."

And with the same way I came, i gone back.
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