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    *Kyuzo again flashes back to the past. Kyuzo's father angerly and eagerly walks out of the village meeting with Kyuzo waiting outside the door*

    Kyuzo "What was all that comotion about"

    Kyuzo's father "Hurry we must get ready"

    *Kyuzo noticing the seriousness of his fathers dimener turns and follows his father as they quickly return home, on the way Kyuzo's father explain the situation*

    Kyuzo's father "By now we have all herd about the Machine Samurai by now, well it seems they are going by samurai villages and forcing others to join them. If they refuse, they are attacking."

    Kyuzo "And we are fighting"

    Kyuzo's father "Exactly, and word has it they are on their way here now"

    *They return home and equip themselves. and then return to the Village hall to join the rest of the Samurai in the Village to wait for the Machine Samurai.*

    *Kyuzo flashes back to the present and finally gets up and and climbs the wall enclosing the temple and gazes out at the city*

    +At the time there was nothing more exhilerating or honerable then going into battle to protect your village+

    *The Machine Samurai start to appear on the horizion*

    Village leader (in a loud thunderous voice)"It is time to fight. Prepare yourselves"

    *The rest of the Samurai except for Kyuzo join in on a battle cry, Kyuzo just stands watching the Machine Samurai come towards the village with a cold emotionless stare*

    Kyuzo's father "Whats wrong are you scard?"

    Kyuzo "No"

    Kyuzo's father "Then whats wrong"

    Kyuzo "Nothing"

    *Kyuzo unsheths his swords and charges the Machine Samurai ahead of the others*

    Random Samurai "Whats he doing?"

    *Kyuzo's father smirks*

    Kyuzo's father "He really wants to fight today"

    Random Villager "Looks like you beat him silly training him"

    Kyuzo's father "Well we are about to find out"

    *The rest of the Samurai charge after. Kyuzo was the first to engage in combat. He had already taken out 3 enemies by the time the rest arrived The battle dragged on for a whole day, the sun was about to set and there were only 3 Machine Samurai left (two of which were minorly wounded), there were only 2 Village Samurai left however. Kyuzo, who had a few cuts and bumps but nothing to serious and his father, who was severly wounded and bleeding heavily. They stood back to back as they were surrounded by the 3 Macine Samurai*

    (this seems easier. =p)
    MS= Machine Samurai
    KF= Kyuzo's Father

    MS 1 "Even if you fools defeat this battalion there will be more sent here, you understand you have lost right, you will all die reguardless for defying us"

    KF "Maybe, but at least we die free"

    MS 2 "Just die you old relec"

    MS 3 "The times are changing, a new world is about to dawn'

    *The instant he Finished Kyuzo sneaked up from behind and took off his head (The Kyuzo that had been standing by his father was a shadow clone)*

    MS 2 "What"

    *Both MS looked around and saw there were 5 Kyuzo surrounding them*

    KF "What on earth, Am I seeing things"

    MS 1 "I have herd of Tricks like this before. Concentrating you Chi (aka mana =p) and brining it fourth. I have never seen it first hand though. In any case only one is real"

    Kyuzo "This is not the only way it can be used"

    *Kyuzo then gave a sinister smile used his second special Chi technique, Extreme speed (This technique makes Kyuzo's twice as fast). All 5 Kyuzo clones started running around making the MS lose track of the real Kyuzo*

    MS 2 "Which is the real one"

    MS 1 "I don't know, I don't........."

    *MS 1's head was sliced off before her could finish his sentance, Kyuzo then made a quick pivot and immediatly attacked and killed MS 2. Kyuzo stood over the defeated MS. And gave a smirk. Kyuzo then walked over to his father and took one of his arms over him to support some of his wieght*

    KF "You fought well today"

    *Kyuzo nodded as they started walking back to the village*

    KF "By the way, when did you learn to do those tricks"

    *Kyuzo turned his head to look towards his father a just gave an expressionless stare and went back to looking forward*

    KF "I guess you are right, we will worry about that later"

    *The battle had draged them far away from the village, so they had a quite a distance to travel back to their village*

    *Kyuzo flashes back to the present still staring out at the city*

    +I never truly fought for the village though, did I+

    That seems like a good ending place for now. I need to think out the next scene carfully. =p
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    After they gone back in the fortress Ilya still won't say anything, she just silently sits on the sofa. Yuki don't know if she's too shocked or what, but she know that if she continue like that it will only make her sick. She wanted to comfort her, but this is something too personal and Yuki feel that they are not yet close enough for her to be beside her.

    Caster found a sofa nearby and from an compressed space (its a small alternated universe some high mages likes to create to store items for quick access) she pull out some instrument and played softly, appearing to just playing to general audience but silently want to calm Master, trying to get her confused emotions out, it better to cry or laugh and not hold it up in her guts.

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    *OMG, i started a story and even before i could even explain all this i end up beaten up ( even tho it's a bit not th way i started - meaning about one talks about 2 men when i meeted a girl and a boy)? lol. ohw comon guys, what about my story? :P insernt into while fighting?, i guess i have no other choice then*

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    i was thinking about that hehehehe.....
    but i thought that you and bar had agreed on that.....well....if you think it is important for the story find a way to insert it later...or just make barzillal edid his posts XD

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    *i decided to eedit my story abit, i'll stick with Barzillals for now, as i will insert mine a bit later, it will make it intesreting ^^*

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    Quote Originally Posted by biganimefan View Post
    *OMG, i started a story and even before i could even explain all this i end up beaten up ( even tho it's a bit not th way i started - meaning about one talks about 2 men when i meeted a girl and a boy)? lol. ohw comon guys, what about my story? :P insernt into while fighting?, i guess i have no other choice then*
    If you look at the first few pages, I got beaten up when I didn't even start any story. :(
    Too much violent people here ;(

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    Well at least Haruhi/Saber hasn't been thrown into any love hexagaons..... yet
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    I rather be thrown in to love hexagon than get beaten up in real life.
    but then I think Haruhi would rather fight than fall in some random love relationship.

    ...so who exactly is in the love hexagon?

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    After being driven a small distance from Archer and Nao *them using the Schorching Bow*, but recieving no real damage, Rider decides that maybe he went a little too easy on them. "That was somewhat fun, but I need a workout, I think I'll let them have a taste of my magma bolts..." *combines the elements that he can control and hurls them at Archer as though a volcano was erupting*

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    er... I think Archer-> Sakura-> Berserker/ Archer->Caster/Illyana/Nao.... oh... wait... I see a pattern...
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