Sky [Poem]
I look out into the night skySeeing nothingUnderstanding nothingWatching only to see time flash byOnly to see people die.I look out at the bright day skySeeing allBut not comprehending it allPeople bullyPeople are bulliedPeople killPeople are killedBut why?
Reach into my soul, Like you would a bowl, On Halloween and lull, Me out into the Sun.
Let me breathe the fresh air, And stop pushing me down the stairs, That lead into the darkness called Despair.
Allow me to grow, My wings and show, You that i don't need you to help me Fly.
xDamnThisHeartIWasGiftedWithx
Married to: hummm....i don`t know yet
good poem...its very deep....
tks for all your hard work..i`l wait for the next one
um umit's good (:
hmm about the deep thing i'm not sure , but just in my opinion ,MY OPINION ONLY , it's not too deep/abstract . maybe you can improve it somewhere and make it more abstaract . lol what the am i doing
actually , don't take my words seriously , because me myself not very sure + i'm not an art person .
still , ithink it's beautiful . good job and keep it up (:(:(:
Thank You! Its okay tell me what you're thinking that is what i like. :D Thanks for reading it.
Reach into my soul, Like you would a bowl, On Halloween and lull, Me out into the Sun.
Let me breathe the fresh air, And stop pushing me down the stairs, That lead into the darkness called Despair.
Allow me to grow, My wings and show, You that i don't need you to help me Fly.
xDamnThisHeartIWasGiftedWithx
Married to: wolfiechan!:D
It was short simple and sweet, I liked it!:D
I liked how observant you seemed about everything and how thought provoking it was too. :)
Girls are what make the world go round, didn't you know that already?
Thanks Ryoga!
Reach into my soul, Like you would a bowl, On Halloween and lull, Me out into the Sun.
Let me breathe the fresh air, And stop pushing me down the stairs, That lead into the darkness called Despair.
Allow me to grow, My wings and show, You that i don't need you to help me Fly.
xDamnThisHeartIWasGiftedWithx
Married to: Internet~ Enganged with my Comp~ Hoho...
this poem have a potential to develope more...i like reading it...and i'd love to read it if u make it longer...
there's this vibe...something unfinished after the last part...makes you want to grasp what happen...
Last edited by Akatsurugi; 08-22-2011 at 12:45 AM.
WHO AM I?True friendship multiplies the good in life and divides its evils. Strive to have friends, for life without friends is like life on a desert island... to find one real friend in a lifetime is good fortune; to keep him is a blessing.
Baltasar Gracian
Married to: N/A
Nice poem! I really like it ^^ Next time, try and add more verses to your poetry! :D
What if there was no lie
Nothing wrong, nothing right
What if there was no time
And no reason, or rhyme
Every step that you take
Could be your biggest mistake
It could bend or it could break
But that's the risk that you take.
Thank You! :D
Reach into my soul, Like you would a bowl, On Halloween and lull, Me out into the Sun.
Let me breathe the fresh air, And stop pushing me down the stairs, That lead into the darkness called Despair.
Allow me to grow, My wings and show, You that i don't need you to help me Fly.
xDamnThisHeartIWasGiftedWithx
Married to: Married?! I'm still a kid you know!!
This is a really touching, nice, cool, and sweet poem... I think are good in making poems~ :)
"Sorry, but it doesn't matter if you're a woman or even a child. I don't go easy on anybody who hurts my comrades"-Gray Fullbuster
"All I need is the power to be able to protect my comrades. So long as I can have the strength to do that, I don't care if I'm weaker than everyone in the world."-Erza Scarlet
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