My return Home (short poem)

[Shino166]

At last I return to my home
but I come defeated and alone.
Knowing love and filled with anger,
heart shredded but soul stronger.
I return home to find I learned
that life and love isn't what I yearned

My return home is filled with shame,
how could I lose and still act the same.
Everyone around me speaks happily
while I hear them, ignoring sorrowfully.
For I am now nothing, standing alone
with only one aspiration, to be gone.

[Akatsurugi]

i also didnt know u can write poems...
and i really like it...well, everything actually...
its like a sad song....and not to mention, full of feeling...

thanks for ur encouragement...now its my time to cheer u up...
Keep it up, shino... :D

[Shino166]

Thanks, it is sad, I used what I was feeling a couple of months ago when I broke up with my gf.
You don't have to cheer me up, I'm not that sad any more

[Akatsurugi]

:) good...i'm glad u are back to ur cheerful self...
i'm always there for u...along with my stupid jokes...XD

[Ryoga]

Thanks, it is sad, I used what I was feeling a couple of months ago when I broke up with my gf.
You don't have to cheer me up, I'm not that sad any more

That's so strange because when i first read this, I was wondering if it had to do with your break up!:) Good job at putting your emotions into a nice little poem. :)

[Shino166]

Yaaaay, I'm glad you liked it and managed to get my emotions, that means It's not half bad.
thanks for your comments ^^

[AmaraKillinEm]

Such a good poem full of feeling and emotion!! Really liked it!! :D

[Shino166]

Thanks, means much to me that you liked it =)

[ashanime91]

I lover this s lot >.> you keep it up you ^_^

[Shino166]

@Asha: thanks asha, I will keep it up ^^.....btw I loled at your typos