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    The Denying [Story by Miu-chan]

    Hello everyone!!

    In this thread I want to share a story with you.
    It's been spooking in my head for months now and I used to daydream a lot about it
    Now I'm finally writing it down
    For y'all exclusively

    Feel free to comment, crit and post some predictions what's going to happen here

    So in short: what's this story about?

    It's about a vampire and a fairy... I think you could call it a romantic adventure
    When young Mateo decided to die someone made him into a vampire and now he does what vampires do, living at nighttime only and feeding on human blood. He got used to his cursed existence and even has made a few friends.
    When Loreena the fairy enters his territory he decides to kill her because her appearence is irritating him... will he manage to kill the fairy? And why is he always feeling so strange when she's around him?
    If you want to know more... you gotta read it

    Who is who?
    Basic characters:
    Hatisake Mateo (the vamp)
    Burina Loreena (the fairy)
    Kazuka Rupo (a werewolf and the best friend of Mateo)
    Otero Fatufa (a witch and the girlfriend of Rupo-kun, she's also a good friend of Mateo and seems to know something about fairies)



    So... now let's finally start with the story!

    Chapter 1

    'No! This can't be! This can't be happening!', Mateo thinks while looking at the terrifying image before his eyes, 'Not in the wedding night! We're on honeymoon goddamnit!'
    "Mateo... i...it's not how... it ... it looks like...", Yurina, his wife, starts to stutter while standing up from the bed, covering herself.
    "Yurina, stop stuttering and don't say such stupid things, it's exactly what it looks like", Usagai - Mateos best friend! - says calmly.
    "I used to love you", Mateo says suddenly totally calm, "You both"
    He turns around and walks out of the bedroom.
    "Ma... Mateo!", Yurina screams and tries to run after him, but Usagai stops her shaking his head saying: "I don't think he wants to see you right now."
    "I like him, he's so kind... I wouldn't really mind falling in love with him... since our fathers decided the wedding. But I can't fall in love with him, because ever since I can think, I used to love you Usagai-kun."
    "I don't really think running after him, telling him that and pittying him would do anything good. He just needs to calm down his head."
    "But he looked so hurt."
    Usagai sighs and gets dressed: "Fine I'll go look after him, I won't get near to him though. He propably wants to hit me right now."
    Yurina smiles and kisses Usagai light on the lips.

    Mateo heard everything, because he is leaning against the wall right next to the door to the bedroom, he really wanted to run away from this place and don't see anyone, but when he got outside the bedroom he suddenly felt so weak, tears were dropping down from his face and wetted his shirt, his legs got weak and wobbly and he couldn't walk.
    But now that he hears that Usagai wants to go after him, he stumbles out of the building and runs to the woods, where the lake is where the three of them used to play when they were kids.
    This lake holds so much memories, good ones - like the fun they had playing in the water.
    And bad ones - like the time when Yurina was five and fell into the lake, she couldn't swim and Mateo jumped after her. He completely forgot that he couldn't swim either and so Usagai had to save them both from drowning.
    Now Mateo stands before the lake, the crescent moon is reflecting in the water and Mateo tightens the rope against his waist. He's totally calm and lookes at the stone at the other end of the rope, once again.
    He lost everything what was precious in his life - his wife - his best friend - his mother just died the other day and what's left is only his shame of having a wife that would sleep with another man than her husband in the wedding night and his father is left too, his father who just keeps telling his son that he's just a nuisance as a family heir.
    With this thoughts, Mateo throws the heavy stone with great effort into the lake and is pulled down by it into the lake, where only the sweet death awaits.

    'I'm dying', he thinks sinking deeper into the lake as his heart beats slower and slower and his lungs fill with water.
    When someone jumps after him his consciousness starts to fade. Suddenly a girl is appearing before him as the other person is coming nearer, dives deeper into the lake.
    'Is this the end? Are you the angel that will take me to heaven? Or are you the devil that will take me to hell?', he thinks when the girl smiles at him. He wants to see how she looks like, but all he can see is her mouth smiling, otherwise she's practically faceless.
    "You know I really don't like water", she says, still smiling, "But I can't let a cute boy like you vanish from this world like this. You will be my creature."
    'Her creature? This must be death, I'm hallucinating.'
    "Now die Mateo", the girl says - still smiling.

    *gasp* Mateo awakes shaking and sweating cold sweat.
    "Geez... that dream again", he says into the dark cold room, "Why do I remember my death so clearly? It has been already almost 150 years! Good thing that the sun already set."
    Mateo sighs and stands up from the bed, in passing he grabs one of his black T-Shirts.
    It was 1864 when he died, the one who jumed after him was Usagai, he saw the bubbles at the surface of the lake and tried to rescue Mateo, but it was already too late. Mateos breathing had already stopped and at that time no one knew about first aid and Mouth-to-mouth resuscitation.
    He had this dream over and over again every day of his undead existence, but when he tries to remember the looks of that girl that was in the water with him, he only remembers her cold, but at the same time kind, smile and her dark red hair that looked like blood floating in the water.
    After getting dressed Mateo grabs a bloodbag from the fridge and pours it into a glass, after that he puts in into the microwave.
    'What a great invention', he thinks while the glass is slowly turning around in the microwave, 'With this I can heat the blood up and don't have to feed on human directly... I don't like killing so the bloodbanks are really a great thing.'
    When he takes the glass out of the microwave and leans against the sideboard to sip his "breakfast" he hears a slight noise.
    "Who's there?", he asks into his appartement.
    'There shouldn't be someone here. How did they come in?', he thinks while checking what it is with his super-vampire-hearing.
    It's just one person, normal human heartbeat.
    "Well hy there", some girl suddenly says appearing right in front of him.
    Mateo looks at her and drops the glass.
    'That smile... that bloody red hair... it's her!'

    to be continued =)


    Author's note


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    Last edited by Miu-chan; 03-28-2012 at 07:34 PM. Reason: forgot something ^^
    Itoshii Hito
    "Anata no tame nara shineru", ja nakute.
    "Anata no tame ni ikiru", koto ni shita yo.
    Mochiron anata mo goissho ni, kono saki mo, sono saki mo.

    Itoshii Hito
    Tatoe umarekawatta to shite mo boku wa kono boku de iru kara.
    Anata mo sono anata de ite ne.
    Soshite mata kono onaji koto iu nda, zutto, zutto.


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    Itoshii Hito - Miyavi
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    Chapter 2

    "Y... You! Who are you!", Mateo yelles at the girl in front of him. She's small... since he's 1,87 m high and she's several heads smaller than him she must be around 1,50 - 1,55 maximum - high.
    "Mateo... you know me", she says still smiling the smile that she used to smile in the lake.
    "No! I only saw you once. Tell me who you are or else...", he begins but then suddenly stops.
    There was that look in her eyes that made him stop... he wanted to tell her that he would force the answers he wants to hear out of her, but when he started the sentence her smile turned into a cold, mean grin.
    "Or else you... what?", she asks with an evil glare in her eyes that gives him goosebumps.

    She's not a vampire... because she has a heartbeat but she's not a human either, otherwise she wouldn't be there when he died 150 years ago. Or was that just his imagination?
    'She looks like a human', Mateo thinks, finally recovering from the shock her cold grin gave him.
    "Or else I'll kill you", Mateo finally ends his sentence.
    Her grin now turns into a real smile and she chuckles: "As if you could do that."
    'I'm really easily provoked', Mateo thinks, 'It's like a challenge... I'll accept it!'
    With his vampire-speed he's behind her before she can even blink. And the next second he broke her neck...
    'Her neck is really thin and so fragile... Well now I will never know her name. Damnit! Why am I always so impulsive?', Mateo asks himself while stepping over the dead body of the girl.
    'Maybe she was a witch...', he thought. He have heard of witches who were able to cast a spell to stop the aging process, though they still can be killed like a normal human. Fatufa-chan casted such a spell on herself as well.
    'Well, since she was a living being and is still warm I will finish with my breakfast', Mateo thinks and he leans over her to drink her blood. She really smells good, like a bouquet of the finest flowers and the woods, like water and sun... 'She smells like nature!'

    "So you really think that I would die from just this?", he hears that voice again.
    'Impossible!'
    "How ... how? I broke you neck witch!", he objects.
    "Oh, so you think I'm a witch?", she laughs, "Ah... I see... it's because you know a witch. Well I need to go now so I'll be giving this to you. Pass it on to your witch. She will be happy receiving it."
    The girl takes his hand and puts a golden coin with a strange pattern in it.
    "Why the hell should I give that to Fatufa-chan?!", he yells.
    "Oh, don't worry Mateo, it's not dangerous for her, quite the opposite, it's a gift not every witch receives. If you keep it to yourself, it won't help anyone."
    He was so stunned that he couldn't kill her, that he didn't give it another try, but now he wants to kill her even more. Who the hell does she think she is? He's not her courier!
    She's turning her back on him when she wants to get to the door to get out of his appartement.
    'That's my chance! I will rip her heart out of her chest!', he thinks, reaching out fast, but what he grabs are only leaves.
    "What the...", he starts, "Who or what are you?!"
    "Ask you witch... when you give her the coin", the voice of the girl is echoing through the room.

    "That's the hell of a story!", Rupo says, "So you really couldn't kill her? And what about that coin? Do you have it with you now?"
    Mateo took of immediately after the strange girl left and is now at his favourite bar with his best friend - the werewolf - Rupo.
    "Yeah, but I don't know if I will show it to Fatufa-chan."
    "Yeah... could be a trap."
    "Sure as hell it is..."
    "What are you guys talking about?"
    Fatufa just entered the bar, first she goes to kiss her boyfriend, then she's turning to Mateo.
    "Mateo had a strange encounter in his apartment", Rupo says.
    "What? Don't tell me he finally took a girl to his appartement and forgot about her because he was drunk!", Fatufa says smiling.
    "That girl took herself into my appartement!", Mateo says, slowly getting grumpier.
    "So it's true!", Fatufa says shocked.
    "No, honey", Rupo says, "There was this strange girl that he always dreams about in his appartement this evening."
    "Oh... so did you manage to hear her name? Who is she?", Fatufa asks.
    When Mateo wants to answer her, his phone rings - a sms. He completely forgot about the coin he kept in the same pocket as his phone and as he takes out the mobile phone to check the sms the coin slips out of the pocket and hits the ground.
    "What's this Mateo? You dropped something", Fatufa says bending down to take the coin.
    "No! Fatufa don't tuch this!", Rupo yelles, but it's already too late, Fatufa tuches the coin and her face gets completely blank, it's like her counciousness was totally whiped out.
    When Rupo catches his falling girlfriend, Mateo takes a look at the sms. "I'm near", it says from an unnknown sender.

    to be continued...

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    Last edited by Miu-chan; 03-28-2012 at 07:37 PM.
    Itoshii Hito
    "Anata no tame nara shineru", ja nakute.
    "Anata no tame ni ikiru", koto ni shita yo.
    Mochiron anata mo goissho ni, kono saki mo, sono saki mo.

    Itoshii Hito
    Tatoe umarekawatta to shite mo boku wa kono boku de iru kara.
    Anata mo sono anata de ite ne.
    Soshite mata kono onaji koto iu nda, zutto, zutto.


    Miu and Katsuro Shizuoka
    Itoshii Hito - Miyavi
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    Chapter 3

    "Fatufa! Fatufa!! Say something! Please honey, talk to me!", Rupo yells while he holds his girlfriend tight.
    Since they are at a bar only for supernatural species nobody wonders about what happens next, Fatufa starts to talking in a weird old language... the language that witches are using when they cast spells.
    "Honey! Please! Come back to me!", Rupo begs and looks up to his friend Mateo, "What are you doing standing around like that! Help me! Help her! Help us!", the werewolf yells, "Somebody help!"
    But Mateo is totally stunned... he's still staring at the sms he received "I'm near" it says.
    'Where is she?', he asks himself starting to look around.
    "Is a witch here? Please, someone has to tell me what she's saying!", Rupo says looking at the other guests.

    'There she is!', Mateo thinks, he just discovered that unmistakable red hair of hers and jumps over at her desk.
    "Hey you... Looks like I managed it to make you giving my gift to the witch", she smiles.
    "You crazy ass b**** what did you do to her?!", he says angrily gripping her neck.
    But the girl just smiles at him and disappears into leaves again.
    'She will be fine... don't worry', her voice echoes in his head, 'But I think I should demonstrate my power to you', she adds, giggling.
    "Arghh!", Mateo makes as his head hurts like his brain is going to explode, "I...It hurts!" The pain wanders along his spine and spreads to his limbs until his entire body is burning with agony. He is relieved when he loses his consiousness. 'Who are you', he asks in his thoughts.
    'Your blood should know me', is the answer he gets.

    "Here I'm a witch, not a really powerful one, but I'll understand what she says.", a waitress says looking down on Rupo and Fatufa.
    'Where did Mateo just dissappear to?', Rupo asks himself, 'That's not important! Right now what's important is Fatufas well-being!', he reminds himself.
    "Yes, please tell me!", he begs the waitress.
    Fatufa keeps blabbering while the waitress is listening to what she says, turning pale.
    "What's the matter?! What is she saying?!", Rupo asks, constantly holding back his tears.
    "That can't be... To think that a thing like this... in this world... I thought they disappeared forever."
    "What are you talking about?!"
    "She will be fine, I can't explain it to you... but she will be fine, just let her accept the spell that was gifted to her. Come with me, you can let her rest at a room in the back of the bar."

    "Arghhh!" Rupo hears Mateo screaming.
    'What the hell is he doing?'
    "I... It hurts!", Rupo hears his friend screaming.
    "What the hell?", somebody yells, "That Vamp just collapsed!"
    "Don't go near him, in this state he could attack you!", someone else says.
    "Can you take her to the back of the bar?", Rupo asks the waitress.
    "Sure, I can make her levitate, therefor I don't have to carry her", the waitress replies.
    Rupo is moving through the crowd that formed around Mateo to get to his friend. He really wants to stay with Fatufa now, but he can't just leave his best friend screaming in pain like this. After all the witch just said that Fatufa will be fine and he can't see a reason why she would lie to him.
    "Mateo? What's up budy? Can you hear me?", Rupo asks while bending over his best friend.
    'Damn it! Why does everybody just keeps collapsing around me today?'
    "Oi! Don't go near him, he will bite you!", someone behind Rupo warns him.
    "He's my friend", Rupo responds, "You look terrible Mateo", he whispers.
    And he really does look terrible. Blood is coming out of his mouth, his ears, even his eyes, his skin seems to be terribly burnt as if he were going into the sunlight.
    'Looks like he fainted', Rupo determines and heaves Mateo over his shoulder to bring him into the back of the bar.

    "Loreena-sama, you are back", Arina says.
    "Yes I am. How turned the battles out? Fill me in Arina", the red-haired girl replies
    "We won two out of three", Arina reports, "Some lower class fairies died and Utheno lost an eye."
    "Have you managed to restore it?", Loreena asks, while walking into the memorial hall where the dead low class fairies are laid out for their families to say farewell.
    "Yes, it wasn't that much of a challenge, I'm glad nobody lost a leg or an arm, to restor that I would have had to call for you", Arina says, "Have you managed to take your creature back?", she asks
    "No, not yet, after all it was just the first day I visited him in almost 150 years. He doesn't trust me, he even tried to kill me. I had to put the seventh grade punishment upon him."
    "Why does it have to be your creature? Can't any Vampire do it?", Arina asks as Loreena does her duty and is talking with the families of those who passed away.
    "Only he has the power to sneak among them, since he is my creature he's almos the same as them. We need him", Loreena replies, then turning to a crying fairy mother: "He fought out of the right reasons and died an honorful death. I'm sure the goddess will give him a reward when he gets to choose his next life."
    "Wouldn't it be better to turn a new human and form him at our will?", Arina asks.
    "No", Loreena replies, "The young ones are too weak to deal with our enemies, they would be easily found out and killed. After all I planned to use him since I made him..."

    To be continued...


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    Last edited by Miu-chan; 03-28-2012 at 07:40 PM.
    Itoshii Hito
    "Anata no tame nara shineru", ja nakute.
    "Anata no tame ni ikiru", koto ni shita yo.
    Mochiron anata mo goissho ni, kono saki mo, sono saki mo.

    Itoshii Hito
    Tatoe umarekawatta to shite mo boku wa kono boku de iru kara.
    Anata mo sono anata de ite ne.
    Soshite mata kono onaji koto iu nda, zutto, zutto.


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    Itoshii Hito - Miyavi
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    Chapter 4

    'Wha... What the hell... my head hurts', Mateo thinks and opens his eyes slowly. he has a blurry view but he can tell from the smells and noises around him, that he's still at the bar.
    "Oh, so you finally woke up?", he hears his friend Rupo next to him.
    "What happened?", he asks hoarsely.
    "Like I know... While I was taking care of Fatufa, you just jumped off and then you collapsed screaming in pain.
    'Oh, right, Fatufa!', he thinks and tries to get up, but his head is still spinning, he's dizzy and almost faints again.
    "Don't push yourself, you lost a lot of blood", Rupo says, "Any Vampire younger than you would have died."
    "Where's Fatufa? Is she allright?", Mateo wants to know while lying back down.

    "I'm fine."
    "Yokatta... That's great", Mateo says relieved.
    "That was one hell of a coin you dropped there", Rupo says smiling.
    "What is it?", Mateo asks.
    Fatufa sits on the bed next to him and takes out the coin.
    "Look at that pattern, do you recognize it? It's celtic knots."
    Mateo looks closely, but his vision is still a little blury, he rubbs his eyes and takes a closer look. This symbol is really a celtic knot... But...
    "How is that connected to your dream-girl?", Rupo asks, "Oh... don't look at me like that, The question is practically written all over your face right now."
    "Stop calling her my dream girl! She's more likely a nightmare!"
    Fatufa chuckles: "People used to call her species something like that in ancient times. The word was "Elb" or "Alb" as in the german word "Albtraum" for nightmare."
    "I don't understand a word of what you're saying", Mateo admitts.

    "Well there where lots of names for her in old Greek, Rome, Great Britain and Ireland. In the rest of Europe too. Her kind was called Nymph, Elb - like I mentioned before, "the old Folk" and so on but today you would simply call her a Fairy."
    'Like Tinkerbell?', he thinks, then he remembers her cold grin and the pain she forced upon him, 'No... more like... a monster'
    "So what about that coin now?", Mateo asks.
    "She put a powerful spell on it. A really old one. It's called "Divine Fairy Protection". I only spaced out because it was too powerful for me. You know for a witch to embody this spell you need to say a specific formula, that uses up most of your magical power."
    "But that's really bad!", Mateo says.
    "It's a small price for a witch to pay to gain this unique and powerful fairy spell", Fatufa explains.
    "But what's it for? Will you be able to use it?"
    "It's like a free ticket to channel the power of all fairy-kind", Fatufa says.

    'What's that supposed to mean', Mateo asks himself.
    "I can clearly see, that you're totally not getting it", Rupo laughs.
    "Well... you know... you looked at me the exact same way when I explained it to you", Fatufa chuckles.
    "Hmpf...", her boyfriend sulks...
    "With this spell embodied within me, I can use the magical power of all the fairies that exist to do whatever I like. I could bring back someone dead... even myself... or I could kill an entire supernatural species..."
    "Is this really such an incredible spell?", Mateo asks.
    "Sure it is. Have you ever heard of Dragons? Or the Youkai from Japan?", Fatufa wants to know.
    "Sure I have", Mateo replies.
    "Now you know why they don't exist anymore."
    "You can't mean...?!"
    "Yes... they were killed by witches who had the spell "Divine Fairy Protection...", Fatufa tells him.

    to be continued...

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    Last edited by Miu-chan; 03-28-2012 at 07:42 PM.
    Itoshii Hito
    "Anata no tame nara shineru", ja nakute.
    "Anata no tame ni ikiru", koto ni shita yo.
    Mochiron anata mo goissho ni, kono saki mo, sono saki mo.

    Itoshii Hito
    Tatoe umarekawatta to shite mo boku wa kono boku de iru kara.
    Anata mo sono anata de ite ne.
    Soshite mata kono onaji koto iu nda, zutto, zutto.


    Miu and Katsuro Shizuoka
    Itoshii Hito - Miyavi
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    Loreena stands at the cliff and looks at the battlefield...
    Many dead bodies are covering the once so beautiful valley. The black blood of her enemies is poisoning the surroundings, killing even if the dark creatures aren't alive anymore.
    'I need to stop this', Loreena thinks.
    "Loreena-sama? What will we do with that place?", Arina asks.
    "It's another valley where no one is allowed to enter. I will bring it out of this dimension."
    "As you wish Loreena-sama", Arina says, "Who shall I bring to help you with this task?"
    Loreena smiles a sad smile: "You mustn't bring anyone. I will handle it by myself."
    "But Loreena-sama! That is impossible! Such a task needs too much magical energy... It will take effect on your life-force!"
    "Don't underestimate me Arina", she smiles calm at her subordinate.
    "But Loreena-sama... Even you as the heir to the Burina-Clan can't...", Arina opposes.
    "Well, stand by and watch", Loreena smirks and lifts her arms.

    Her magical energy is gripping this now cursed and poisoned place and compresses it into a ball of black earth. Loreena smiles her cold smile as she's sending a message into the dimension she's throwing the poisoned ball of earth. 'I'm only returning your Nakama to you King Sharano. Or should I call them your pawns?'
    Many dark gray bodies with leathery wings are mixed in the ball of black earth, the few survivers are screaming and whining.
    "Don't act as you could feel something, you lowly creatures", Loreenas powerful voice resounds above the valley that is now only a crater, when the ball of black earth, corpses and dying is vanishing into a black hole that leads to the dimension of the fairies enemies.
    Loreena looks at the crater and sighs. 'It will take time to restore the landscape after this war', she thinks.
    "Loreena-sama? Are you alright?", Arina asks.
    Loreena smiles at her kindly: "Yes I am. Arina, I will now go to the Time-Keepers. You may return to the palace."
    "But Loreena-sama! Will you be alright? Why do you want to go to the Time-Keepers?", she says worried.
    "It will buy us some time, when the time in the dimension called earth is flowing faster than in the others. I will have more time to convince my creature to do as I say."
    "But to request such a thing, they sure won't listen to you!", Arina opposes.
    "Even they have to admit that disturbing the flow of time for a bit is better than to be whiped out completely. Now follow my orders and go back"
    Arina looks angry at her Mistress: "Fine, I'll do as you say Loreena-sama."

    When Arina left Loreena is leaning against a tree looking at the former battlefield that was once such a beautiful valley full of medical herbs, a lake, a little river, animals and a small village. Everything that remains now is only a crater.
    Loreena presses her hand against the wound she just got at her rib cage between the fourth and the fifth rib on the left.
    'Beeing this dimension itself really is a pain in the ass sometimes, this will leave a scar', she thinks, 'I hope this will be over soon, otherwise I will get poisoned from their filthy blood. I need to save my people and my own life too.'
    She now takes a deep breath, cleaning the last fumes of the poisonous blood from the air and then opens a gate to the dimensions where the Time-Keepers are residing.
    "Oh, look at this", one of the weird creatures called Time-Keepers is saying.
    They really look weird, they're neither Gobblins nor Dwarfs but something in between.
    "The Grand-daughter of Morgana le Fay is paying us a visit. What do you want, Queen Loreena from the blood of the Lady of the lake the Burina clan also known as Arthus-clan?"
    Loreena bows before them: "My sires, I have a request..."

    to be continued...

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    Itoshii Hito
    "Anata no tame nara shineru", ja nakute.
    "Anata no tame ni ikiru", koto ni shita yo.
    Mochiron anata mo goissho ni, kono saki mo, sono saki mo.

    Itoshii Hito
    Tatoe umarekawatta to shite mo boku wa kono boku de iru kara.
    Anata mo sono anata de ite ne.
    Soshite mata kono onaji koto iu nda, zutto, zutto.


    Miu and Katsuro Shizuoka
    Itoshii Hito - Miyavi
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    "Well, bring forth thy request Queen Loreena", one of the Time-Keepers said.
    It's the third time Loreena is in the dimension of the Time-Keepers, it's like a bright yellow room, where the lines of time of every dimension are kept. They look like an old movie where in the time when they where still on film rolls picture for picture for picture.
    First was when she was born... She was there to set the basic of her connection with the Fairy-dimension, second was when she was announced as the queen of all Fairy-kind to fully take over the power of the Medium - which is connected to the Fairy-dimension in life-force and magical power.
    "As you wish, my Sires. I request a speed up of time for the earth-dimension."
    "You know we can't allow that, therefore we can't do that", the strange creatures refused her request.
    "Do you all want to die? I have a plan to wipe out the Devny forever but it's only going to work if I am able to spend more time in the earth dimension to convince my creature to do as I say."
    "Why don't you use mind-control over him? It would be the easiest way", one of the Time-Keepers suggested.
    "I plan to let him sneak among them, you should not underestimate the magical power of a Devnos. They would notice", Loreena said.
    "Is your plan really going to work as you planned it? You know that every Fairy-Queen befor you died when she tried to whipe out the Devny", one of the Gobblin-Dwarfs said.
    "I'm 100 % sure of that. But that is just when you do as I requested."
    "Let's talk this over", the Time-Keepers said.

    There are four Time-Keepers, one for each dimension and the head, which is in charge of keeping them together.
    The Time-Keepers now faced to the "Movie" of each dimension and the head connected them with magical silver strings.
    Loreena nows that that means that they are looking for the consequences it will have when they grant her wish.
    After some time passed, the head cut the connection and the Time-Keepers turned to Loreena.
    "We will grant your wish, but not in that way you requested it."
    Loreena had hoped that they would do it as she said, but they have decided to do it in that way she imagined already... And what the head said next confirmed her prediction: "We will slow down the time at the Fairy-dimension. So when you're spending one day at the Earth-dimension, only one minute in the Fairy-dimension will pass. It will cause pain to your heart and decrease your magical power, but since you're the most powerfull Fairy Queen for a long time it's almost not noticable."
    "I do this for my people and for the sake of the world. That little pain means nothing to me", Loreena said.
    "Well then... Let us begin", the Head said and when the Time-Keepers change the flow of time of the Fairy-dimension Loreena screams in pain until she collapses...

    "How can she be a Fairy?", Mateo asks, "She hasn't even had pointed ears!"
    Mateo is still resting at the back of the bar, he's feeling a bit better now, since the waitress brought him some blood. Since this is a bar only for supernaturals, they offer special drinks to all kinds of mystical creatures.
    "How can you be a Vampire, when your fangs aren't even out?", Fatufa asks her friend, "Of course she looks like a human, if not, everyone would notice."
    "Do Fairies really look that different from humans?", Rupo asks.
    "Depends on what kind of Fairy she is", Fatufa says, "But since she's able to cast 'Devine Fairy Protection' she shouldn't look that different from a human in her true form."
    "What do you mean with that?", Mateo wants to know.
    "There are three kinds of Fairies... the ones called 'Changers', the ones called 'Healers' and the ones called 'Casters'.
    The Changers are something like Werewolfs, except for the fact, that they can change into every animal they picture... and mystical animals too like a Griffon or a Dragon.
    The Healers are simply what their name says, they're Fairies who are really skillfull with healing spells, it's said that they can even restore lost limbs if the wound is still open and bleeding.
    The 'Casters' are like us witches, except that they are more powerful because Fairies have a deeper connection to the nature than we witches have. Though I don't know why we witches aren't able to connect to nature as deep as the Fairies."
    "But what you just said means that they're nothing special, they can only do a little bit more than we", Rupo opposes, "I don't understand why everyone is making such a big fuss about Fairies."

    Fatufa chuckles and smiles at her boyfriend: "You certainly have never heard of the origins of the Supernaturals."
    "Sure, we have slowly developed during the centuries our origins are the humans. Though nobody knows why a human could suddenly change his looks a little bit", Rupo says. Mateo is following their conversation with great interest, he has never heard a thing about the origins of the supernatural, he hardly knew what was happening to him when he turned into a Vampire.
    "That's what most Supernatural Species think. But it's wrong.
    It's right that we all have our origins in the human species but we haven't developed through the centuries. The Fairies made us into what we are."
    "What's that supposed to mean?", Mateo wants to know.
    "The Fairy-Kind is older than Men-Kind, their origin lies in nature itself, they exist since the world is existing. And the Supernaturals exist because of the Fairies, they exist because the Fairies shared some of their powers with humans", Fatufa explains.
    "So you mean I'm only a Vampire because of the Fairies?", Mateo asks.
    "Yes, you're right. Especially you because you were turned by a Fairy", Fatufa answers her friend.
    Mateos dark blue eyes turn so dark, you could call them black: "Well, if that's the case, that's one more reason to kill her", he growls...

    to be continued...

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    Itoshii Hito
    "Anata no tame nara shineru", ja nakute.
    "Anata no tame ni ikiru", koto ni shita yo.
    Mochiron anata mo goissho ni, kono saki mo, sono saki mo.

    Itoshii Hito
    Tatoe umarekawatta to shite mo boku wa kono boku de iru kara.
    Anata mo sono anata de ite ne.
    Soshite mata kono onaji koto iu nda, zutto, zutto.


    Miu and Katsuro Shizuoka
    Itoshii Hito - Miyavi
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    Itoshii Hito
    "Anata no tame nara shineru", ja nakute.
    "Anata no tame ni ikiru", koto ni shita yo.
    Mochiron anata mo goissho ni, kono saki mo, sono saki mo.

    Itoshii Hito
    Tatoe umarekawatta to shite mo boku wa kono boku de iru kara.
    Anata mo sono anata de ite ne.
    Soshite mata kono onaji koto iu nda, zutto, zutto.


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    "No Mateo! You can't kill her!", Fatufa refuses, "You can't kill her because of the spell!"
    "Does that mean, that the spell would turn ineffective if we kill the Fairy who casted it?", Rupo asks.
    "No, I already embodied the spell so it should be fine even if the Fairy who casted it dies. What I mean with "you can't kill her" is that she's to powerful for you..."
    "What do you mean she's too powerful for me?! Too powerful... my ass... I already managed to break her neck, so if there's a way to kill her for good, you just need to tell me and I will do it!", Mateo yells.
    "Only really powerful Fairies can cast the spell 'Divine Fairy Protection'. She must be one of the higher-ups, maybe a servant directly under the Fairy queen. I'm sure she let you broke her neck."
    "What's that supposed to mean?!", Mateo now gets really angry, have she really just questioned his power?
    "One with as much power as she could certainly avoid any kind of attack. When you tried to attack her tonight at the bar you failed... Right?", Fatufa says.
    "She just vanished into leaves... I couldn't help it...", Mateo defends himself.

    "What tells you that she can't vanish into leaves every time you get near enough to her to kill her?", Fatufa asks.
    Mateo sulks: "Fine! If you're not going to help me, someone else sure will!"
    The Vampire gets up and walks out of the room with mixed feelings. Mateo understands what his friend means... The problem is that he doesn't want to. He just wants to kill this Fairy that obviously made him the monster he is today. Once again he feels the itching of his loss, he misses his humanity, the feeling of his beating heart, the amazing feeling of breathing in and out...
    Mateo now sits at the bar and takes one drink after another. Rupo and Fatufa are already leaving, warning him not to do something stupid.
    When they left Mateo already feels the effect of the alcohol but he still reconizes that somebody just sat down next to him.

    "Who... are you... damnit... I really hate strangers these days...", Mateo growls.
    "My my... you don't have to be so mean... I'm a sorcerer who can easily read the thoughts of people... My name is Jinkan", the man introduces himself. He has long black hair and his skin looks more like it's gray then rosy how it should be with Supernaturals, since they have their origins in the human race they keep the skin-colour-tones of them. The guy also has strange black eyes.
    'What a weird sorcerer', Mateo thinks, 'Maybe he wanted to look weird...'
    "Whaddaya want?", the Vamp babbles.
    "I just read in your mind that you're having trouble with a Fairy..."
    "So what?! It doesn't concern you! In fact you should really keep yourself out of my mind!"
    "Well... what if I tell you, that I know how to kill a Fairy?"
    "You... *hic* really know?"
    "Of course I do... All you need to do is drive a stone-knife through her heart", the sorcerer tells him smiling.
    "Where the hell should I get a stone-knife!?"
    "You'll have to find one... I bet you will... After all this town is really big..."
    The sorcerer smiles at Mateo again and then leaves...
    "I'll definately find such a stone-knife!", Mateo says determined...

    to be continued...

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    Itoshii Hito
    "Anata no tame nara shineru", ja nakute.
    "Anata no tame ni ikiru", koto ni shita yo.
    Mochiron anata mo goissho ni, kono saki mo, sono saki mo.

    Itoshii Hito
    Tatoe umarekawatta to shite mo boku wa kono boku de iru kara.
    Anata mo sono anata de ite ne.
    Soshite mata kono onaji koto iu nda, zutto, zutto.


    Miu and Katsuro Shizuoka
    Itoshii Hito - Miyavi
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